Hey watz up. My name is SOLS and I'm jus tryin to share my poetry and stories with the world.
I luv to write. I do it all the time when I have spare time. I can write on anything from a piece of paper to a shredded scrap. I'm working on a book at the moment that I might share with some of u fellow writers.
Tell me what u think about my poetry and stories. I like to know what I can improve on or do more of.
Writing and reading is a big part of my life so I'll also read ur stuff and comment.
Sample poem:
No Role Model
Yeah I blame it on society
For our world being in a calamity
Turn around and all I see is tragedy
Some are in the light, but barely
If a person falls all others do is laugh
But oh don't help on my behalf
I shake my head as I see a selfish world
People sit in their own bubbles nice and curled
All I gotta do is "get mine"
As long as I "do me" I'll be fine
This all I ever hear
Slowly down my cheek rolls a tear
I hate to say it, but it must be said
Chilvary is mostly nowadays dead
Can't get it out my head
People used to help each other
That used to be my sister and brother
Now even families are torn apart
It is slowly breaking my heart
Single men and women raising kids
Make me want to pray and close my eyelids
All everyone cares about is money
Let me tell you now it don't taste as sweet as honey
Sucess is more bitter sweet
Cause most got it through deciet
Then the rich feed others in other lands
Not listening to our countries demands
So yeah I blame it on society for not being a good role model
Shout outs to my poetry family.......
---Squizzle
---Q-pid
---Blakdiamon
---Lady Purple
---Mel
---Haze
I luv to write. I do it all the time when I have spare time. I can write on anything from a piece of paper to a shredded scrap. I'm working on a book at the moment that I might share with some of u fellow writers.
Tell me what u think about my poetry and stories. I like to know what I can improve on or do more of.
Writing and reading is a big part of my life so I'll also read ur stuff and comment.
Sample poem:
No Role Model
Yeah I blame it on society
For our world being in a calamity
Turn around and all I see is tragedy
Some are in the light, but barely
If a person falls all others do is laugh
But oh don't help on my behalf
I shake my head as I see a selfish world
People sit in their own bubbles nice and curled
All I gotta do is "get mine"
As long as I "do me" I'll be fine
This all I ever hear
Slowly down my cheek rolls a tear
I hate to say it, but it must be said
Chilvary is mostly nowadays dead
Can't get it out my head
People used to help each other
That used to be my sister and brother
Now even families are torn apart
It is slowly breaking my heart
Single men and women raising kids
Make me want to pray and close my eyelids
All everyone cares about is money
Let me tell you now it don't taste as sweet as honey
Sucess is more bitter sweet
Cause most got it through deciet
Then the rich feed others in other lands
Not listening to our countries demands
So yeah I blame it on society for not being a good role model
Shout outs to my poetry family.......
---Squizzle
---Q-pid
---Blakdiamon
---Lady Purple
---Mel
---Haze
- Last seen 2 days ago. Member since September 13, 2006.
- I'm a malachite opening poet for 445 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is live and learn, but don't let life pass you by.
- I am a 17 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a lil of everything like keeping my creative mind going with my gift of acting and singing.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/solsthatsme
- I am in the groups A Heaven For A Thug, A 1111 VIP Loung, Those Teens Who Love To Write
- I have 445 comments, 4 contests
My Poetry
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She closed her eyes and jumped
Nothing but peace and faith would guide her now -
I'm coping with the truth of things trying to find the ground
I know I'm misunderstood by most all around7 lines, 1 comment, August 23 -
He just had me mesmorized
As he looked me in the eyes -
In some sense I'm still waiting
For you to walk back in that door
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haze101 on August 26you are the most impossible person to read. i can usually flip people open and just start readin but yo book got this big ass lock on it and my skills in lock picken aint that good. idk wat to do with you sahara
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Rebekah-Ann on May 15Stunning page!!!
Thank you for entering one of my contests. Keep well!
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QuackQuackTiffany on May 3, 2007Hey. You should comment on my poem "Great Fathers" Its amazing =]
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Sols on October 9, 2006Yeah I added you because u like to write dark stuff and u seem to be a creative person.
