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Why I write:

 

I am here for fun, friendship and enlightenment.

 

I am reluctant to call myself a 'poet'... I am new to writing and only found my muse about 2 years ago...  She does tend to come and go as she pleases...  I am here though, to improve as a writer.

 

You can find out a lot about my personality by reading my poems, but if there is anything in particular you would like to know, the easiest way to find out would be to just ask me!

 

Mostly I write to release my emotions.  Sometimes what I write based on fact, sometimes it's fictional.  I use a lot of different styles and am always experimenting with different forms.  I am here to learn and to broaden my creative horizon.

 

For me, I find my best work is written when I just type it out like I think it.  Raw and unedited.  The more I work on something, the more it gets 'cliche' or just not me anymore.  BUT I am not adverse to taking advice from others - a different pair of eyes is always helpful.

 

In saying all of this, I have to say as I have grown as a writer, I have grown in maturity to.  I am not the senstitive type (well even if I am I don't let it show!) and critical comments are more then welcome on my writes but please be respectful, tactful, and honest!

 

Keep in mind also that we all have different styles of writing.  If you do critique my poem technically, please don't be offended if I don't take all your advice.  It does not mean that I didn't appreciate it, it just means that if I was to change every single thing I wrote because someone told me to change it, then I would be forever editing... The poem would no longer be mine would it?

 

I always return the favor when it comes to comments, critical or causal.  I will admit that I mostly give casual comments... There a few different reasons as to why but I won't explain here :)

 

Here is a great link on commenting

If you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all

 

 

Some random 'facts' about me:

  • In general I am a friendly, easy-going person - but don't make me angry LOL
  • Some say I could talk under water with rocks in my mouth LOL
  • But actually growing up I was extremely shy
  • Sometimes I am very outgoing and love to drink and party
  • Sometimes I am very introverted and love to sit by myself in my house enjoying the silence
  • I am a night owl and I hate mornings
  • I'm a perfectionist and a procrastinator both at the same time... so I guess you could say I'm never satisfied!
  • I lead a very busy life and am not one to sit still for long

 

These are my 4 dogs - they are my babies:

 

 MY GIRLS

 

 

 

OH yeah... I also have a husband LOL it's our 8th wedding aniversary on the 7th of may.

 

This is my hubby's first poem he wrote

I think it's quite good, but I am biased

Coffee beans

when I wake up in the morning I feel safe and secure

your love is my blanket

it keeps me warm in the cold of dawn

your eyes closed so tight, our love so sweet and pure

 

when we awaken and I get that first kiss

its like all is new again

our love is a strange kind of bliss

I can face the world; I am alive for you

 

love is a strange thing

it can make bringing a morning coffee

into a beautiful caring ritual

As important as you wearing my ring

 

Seven years has what it has been

that’s a lot of coffee

and a lot of love

I get to see in each and every coffee bean

 

 



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  • Akimbo on May 12
    Belated congrats on your anniversary... anybody who can squeeze an extra f into coffee, has gotta be doing something right... Kudos, Kkj
  • chino333 : hey on May 12
    Enter my contest only 2 contestents and there are four awards maybe win a gold
  • chino333 : hey on May 12
    Enter my contest only 2 contestents and there are four awards maybe win a gold
  • Awww I know I should comment on your poetry, but your dogs are just too cute! Beautiful page



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