I'm a little spastic in my writing.
My poems seem messy and amateurish to me.
Tell me if you agree.
I didn't mean to make that rhyme.
Just so you know.
Go on, click. You know you want to.
My poems seem messy and amateurish to me.
Tell me if you agree.
I didn't mean to make that rhyme.
Just so you know.
Go on, click. You know you want to.
- Last seen 7 hours ago. Member since December 7, 2007.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 175 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "An enemy can partly ruin a man, but it takes a good-natured injudicious friend to complete the thing and make it perfect". - I am a 15 year old girl from North Carolina (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm enjoying summer .
- I am in the groups Contests for POD POW POM POY
- I have 175 comments, 5 contests, 138 poems
My Poetry
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Your name's still on my shoe, you know.
That shoddy black low top with blue ink on the toe.24 lines, 2 comments, October 30
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Phoenix Shadow on November 25, 2008
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Phoenix Shadow : Charming ^_^ on November 25, 2008I like your AP page, && you're writing is overall, brilliant. I hope you continue to write and keep doing whatever you can to improve!
"My poems seem messy and amateurish to me.
Tell me if you agree."
I don't. Messy is the POINT of poetry. Break the rules, however it suits you just have fun! It never matters what other people think, it's about what you think. && btw, I think you're stunning anyways =)
&& (maybe you're an amateur? but) you're not very amateurish. You're writing is good, SURE u can improve and I'm confident you will. The more you commit to improving, the more you will. =)
But hey we all write for our own reasons. Make your poetry your own, and enjoy it. Nobody matters but you =)
Peace,
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The Otep on September 8, 2008*huggies you* Hello and signing your amazig guestbook!
