my poetry is raw. I usually don't go back and fix mistakes, I post it as it is. I keep it real. I do have a couple of dark pieces out there, thought I'd give it a try, and they rhyme, all my work does. If you read you would probly come back and say some of it was forced, which your right, but thats my style. I want to say what I have to say and if it takes a few extra words to do it, so it must..lol
- Last seen on Aug 8 1:33 PM 2006. Member since May 25, 2006.
- I'm a malachite opening poet for 434 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I am new and raw and full of mistakes!!!".
- I am a 28 year old girl (United States)
- I have 434 comments, 11 poems
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After all these years, I've waited so long
I thought my best defense was being strong.45 lines, 9 comments, July 9, 2006. In Personal -
make a poems into a guessing game. You may think you know what its about but you won't know exaclty till the very last line, it has to be funny, and make peo17 lines, 2 comments, June 14, 2006. In Humor
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lovelypoet on June 21, 2006well I just want a nice contest where poets actually let other poets know if they like their work. Just trying my best!
thnx for checking it out though
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classic disaster x3 on June 6, 2006hey. thanks for the comment on my poem. i really appreciate it. ♥.
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anghellic shadows on May 30, 2006thinx!!! i think everbody dose you though a stage that they fear there self. Sometime i look in the mirrow and see somebody else.peole just get lost and confsued just by looking in the mirrow.
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anghellic shadows on May 30, 2006thinx for reading the poem. It's one if my favorites.
