"~Nothing is funnier than
unhappiness, I grant you
that. But
...
~Yes, yes, it's the most
comical thing in the world.
And we laugh, we laugh,
with a will, in the
beginning. But it's always
the same thing. Yes, it's
like the funny story we have
heard too often, we still
find it funny, but we don't
laugh any more."
unhappiness, I grant you
that. But
...
~Yes, yes, it's the most
comical thing in the world.
And we laugh, we laugh,
with a will, in the
beginning. But it's always
the same thing. Yes, it's
like the funny story we have
heard too often, we still
find it funny, but we don't
laugh any more."
- Last seen on Mar 19 12:35 AM 2008. Member since July 12, 2005.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 32 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "And destruction is after all a form of creation...".
- I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I am in the groups A Cyber Cafe for the In Love Looking a, DuctTaped Hearts n BarbedWire Feelings
- I have 32 comments, 28 poems
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So upon consideration of the future I find myself alone, and not just lonely but dreadfully afraid. Afraid of what is to come, of what I ha12 lines, March 27, 2007
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They get so damned high
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For every time they said "you're not good enough," That you should just give up before you begin because "your hopes are too high"48 lines, February 26, 2007
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EternityGazer : yep... here's my edit changing the crappy lines, good oui ou non? on February 22, 2007a soft grin creeps onto his face
adorned with gleaming eyes
and a voice husky and melodic
something pretty
and then it slips away
behind a thin mystifying veneer
like the moon fading at dawn
beauty beneath a calming façade
his steps were quiet and jovial
a simple pitter patter
a bounce, a skid, a stop
something free
yet restricted, tense and eye-catching
serenity in a halfhearted motion
keen definition filling the empty
a steady figure shifting and twisting
pulling me into the picture <--- need better line
something bright
marred by what doesn’t belong
a frown in our picturesque dusk
it curved into a tight false smile
like a tear in the softest fabric
humanity placed in pure perfection <--- necessary? -
ShukketsuKokoro on December 29, 2005Well i dunno, I dont think its very good. I'd say change it just because well.. its mad/sad...come on now thats a bit... you knw...3rd grade lol no offense cuz i think that peoms really GOOD but yeah you know...
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EternityGazer on December 27, 2005I wanna know if you think the mad and sad change makes my poem better or worse. I'm thinking of submitting it to sequel.
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ShukketsuKokoro on July 16, 2005Thanks bunchs, and just to say i love anime with a burning passion as well! ^^ and alll the pretties <3 mi bishies <3<3<3<3 .....some ppl call me crazy u.u ^^ i think i jsut have good taste! <3<3DARK<3Howl<3Itachi<3 my loverz <3 my pretties <3
