About the author:
Most of these poems are written to music. So, basically they're lyrics but I felt like getting some input on them. as for likes
Likes- Nirvana, Weezer, Meatpuppets, PIXIES
Dislikes - People who lie just to be nice. and "Rock Music" where it is now.. It's in such a horrible state.
About the author's writing:
When I write it just comes out. It's not written to rhyme or make sense. It's written to be a release. That's WHY I write.
Additional note from the author:
Any and all critisism is welcome and appreciated but will NOT influence my writing.
Most of these poems are written to music. So, basically they're lyrics but I felt like getting some input on them. as for likes
Likes- Nirvana, Weezer, Meatpuppets, PIXIES
Dislikes - People who lie just to be nice. and "Rock Music" where it is now.. It's in such a horrible state.
About the author's writing:
When I write it just comes out. It's not written to rhyme or make sense. It's written to be a release. That's WHY I write.
Additional note from the author:
Any and all critisism is welcome and appreciated but will NOT influence my writing.
- Last seen on Nov 16 2:58 AM 2006. Member since February 8, 2004.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 25 comments.
- I am a 16 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Musician.
- Visit my homepage at www.onlinerock.com/musicians/Shiftedpep
- I have 25 comments, 43 poems
My Poetry
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Gimme Gimme Gimme
You're always wantin'
Guest Book
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Hey i really loved the new stuff you put up...you've got so much tALent...i know You DonT reaLIze iT but YOU DO. I swear...yOU teLL shiT LIke It is>..u doNt sUgAr cOaT anyTHing ...andThats wHat I love aBOut U. YouR amAZinG...and IM gLad we Talk onLIne.
yOUr spEcIAL, UniquE...and a wonDerFUL ...NON BORING guy! lol...hehe..and I wIsh u LUck At ALL uR shOws aT the MaLL...YouVe gOt taleNt and I knoW uR goNna GO fAR in LIfe TakE caRe
MucH reSPEcT...
Yvette, aka ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***
YOUR AMAZING. -
whispernthedark on March 1, 2004Oh....YOU GOT MARRIED AND I DIDN'T GET INVITED???? hmmmm, I'm very disappointed. Hope all is well, I have taken a "no-comment" vow, none on yours til there's some on mine
hope all is good for you....
take care
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I truly respect everything you write... You move me with your work. There's something about everything you write..it captivates me! You, cause i have talked to you online, well you are just one awesome person...Beautiful poems, and very different !!
MUCH RESPECT!!
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To Be Continued on February 15, 2004I'm intrigued by your work, Michael. Different. Definately your own style. Keep writing and letting your emotions flow out through words on paper. It seems to help. You've acquired many fans, so obviously, you're doing something right--they don't seem to be dissappointed, and neither am I.
