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I am a 21 year old female who has done a lot of changing and growing in the last year. I have a son who was born on February 29, 2008 and his name is Zachariah Bryant. He is the most amazing thing in my life, my little miracle. He was 2 months premature and was healty except for one problem which as of June 19, 2008 was fixed. I have settled down and straightened up. I am sorry to all those that I have hurt over the years and to those that I feel have drifted away I am sorry I never meant to push you away...

I would appreciate it if you commented on my poetry honestly, don't just tell me you like it so you won't hurt my feelings, tell me the truth, I will never know what is wrong with my work if no one tells me.

  • Last seen on Jul 2 11:46 PM. Member since September 30, 2004.
  • I'm a pyrite eye poet for 1,174 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Don't cry for what was yesterday, smile for what is today and what will be tomorrow".
  • I am a 21 year old woman from Indiana (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a mother and a student.
  • I am in the groups lost in this world
  • I have 1,174 comments, 9 contests, 2 addlines, 2 columns, 144 poems, 4 stories

My Poetry

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  • In August we heard you were going to come,
    Happily we told the whole family the news,
    54 lines, 4 comments, June 11, 2008
  • To see you with her, / Brings me to tears, / I know that you're finally moving on, / To see you with her, / Only strengthens my fears, / My
    39 lines, 1 comment, May 10, 2007. In Lyrics, Personal, Sad, Love
  • You were always better than me, you learned early on that life’s tough.
    I am anything you want me to be, but I am still not enough.
    19 lines, 5 comments, April 6, 2007
  • Judge me again, you want to,
    I can see it in your eyes,
    25 lines, 6 comments, March 20, 2007

My Stories

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Guest Book

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  • Mark Rickerby on November 14, 2006
    Hi Sharon,

    Thanks for the visit on my author page. It was a great surprise to hear from you. Looks like you've been very busy. No posts since March?? I think we both have some catching up to do.

    Talk to you soon,

    Mark
  • mssonah on September 25, 2006
    i like your site it's very good

    ---------sona----------
  • AMEgirly on February 22, 2006
    hey! ive been readin some of ur work and i just want to say ur an awesome writer and should b very proud of urself! keep up the amazing work!
  • drusilla36 on February 13, 2006
    hey ya, what is your group called, i was wondering if i could join it
    dru xx

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