The monotone of the rain is beautiful,
And the sudden rise and slow relapse
Of the long multitudinous rain.
The sun on the hills is beautiful,
Or a captured sunset sea-flung,
Bannered with fire and gold.
A face I know is beautiful-
With fire and gold of sky and sea,
And the peace of long warm rain.
~~ Monotone , by Carl Sandburg
And the sudden rise and slow relapse
Of the long multitudinous rain.
The sun on the hills is beautiful,
Or a captured sunset sea-flung,
Bannered with fire and gold.
A face I know is beautiful-
With fire and gold of sky and sea,
And the peace of long warm rain.
~~ Monotone , by Carl Sandburg
- Last seen on Nov 19 8:09 AM. Member since March 7, 2004.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 298 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "nice guys come in first.".
- I am a 24 year old guy from New Jersey (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm an astrophysicist/composer.

























- I have 298 comments, 3 contests, 1 addline, 72 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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Why wasn't Finny asleep on the bed?
He didn't lay down on my feet or my head,18 lines, 1 comment, April 14 -
Where was the moon
when I caught the sun?27 lines, 1 comment, September 22, 2008
My Stories
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III: The Phone Call
{ring, ring} ^click^ [voices]484 lines, 2 comments, March 9, 2004. In <200 lines, Other -
II: The Rehearsal
Later that night, Noah had a rehearsal with his band, This Side Up. He rode his bike to the off-campus house of Mike, the drummer. Two summers804 lines, 2 comments, March 9, 2004. In <200 lines, Other -
Prologue: The Dream
Noah stood at a crossroads that stretched out to the horizon on either side. The sky above him was steel grey, or brick red; clouds roiled and chur598 lines, 3 comments, March 9, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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Tweedle Dee on October 2, 2008i feel as if i know you.. but I don't know where. Did you go by a different name on here? but I'm sure I've met you... hmm.
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Lone Defender : ... on February 28, 2007Thanks for the bronze in your contest and the helpful critique. Good luck with other contests in the future.

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Hyper Music : He's great, he's great, he smells nice, too! on January 17, 2007You are wonderful and I love sharing a love of poetry (the reading and the writing) with you. You're amazles.
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Ava Noire on September 23, 2004perdyful page

