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Hi, i'm holly...this i suppose, is just a place to write, a place where i can put thoughts down in to a context that is not always as complex as the way i see them.

I don't mind what you think of my writing, and comments would be apreciated.
In your comments on my writing i would like to see:


Critical reviews,
Good and bad points,
general thoughts.



lists of things:

favourite things, in no particular order:

1. school...well lessons, haha what a geek i sound.
2. My bed, means going to sleep, never a bad thing.
3. being outside, i love it!
4. doing exercise.
5. running, i run everywhere!
6. meeting new people.
7. day dreaming...i do it a lot
8. laughing or making people laugh.
9. having good days.
10. listening to songs i like.
11. reading.
12. writing.

favourite food:

1. pasta.
2. chicken.
3. ice cream...lol.


Favourite songs:

1. can't catch tomorrow.
2. kill the director.
3. moving to new york.
4. hurricane jane.
5. viva la veda...can't believe coldplay didn't have a number 1 in the charts before!
6. wonder wall.
7. 1985.
8. teaching myself to dream.
9. shine on.
10. the trick to life.

least favourite things:

1. feeling ill.
2. getting bad grades at school.
3. doing exams, unless its maths, that's fun!
4. being tired.
5. milk...yuck.
6. getting messy or dirty.
7. being late for school, i get really frustrated then lol.
8. chemistry...yuck yuck yuck!!!!!!!


Have you read Twilight, new moon, eclipse and breaking dawn??? if you haven't...then go to the book store now!!! they are amazing.

Poems I'm focused on

  • eyes meeting, for a second the world seems to disappear,
    24 lines, 5 comments, June 1. In Life, Love, growing up
  • through skies stained with blood, They move,
    13 lines, 1 comment, May 19
  • You seem to enfold me in your arms, Oh how strange,
    13 lines, 1 comment, May 16. In Life

My Poetry

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  • on the sidewalks there are drawings, rough outlines of creatures unknown,
    13 lines, 2 comments, July 21. In Love
  • if i could talk too the stars in the sky, I'd ask them if they like it there,
    14 lines, 1 comment, July 11
  • 100 stars, all in the sky, Beautiful and delicate, circling as we fly,
    19 lines, 1 comment, July 11. In Thoughts
  • she wonders if you feel her pain, When she stands alone and dreams, she always contemplates,
    8 lines, June 27

My Stories

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  • Chapter 1. 1 / It seemed an age since i had been outside, the clean air upon my face felt like something from a dream. I had been resting a
    1549 lines, May 30. In 600-2000 words, Love, Pain, Teen

My other items

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  • The Crystal Skies at storywrite
    Chapter 1. 1 / It seemed an age since i had been outside, the clean air upon my face felt like something from a dream. I had been resting at home for so long i could hardly remember what the real

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