Serenade of Sins• Show poetry

"And when I'm gone, just carry on
Don't mourn, rejoice
Everytime you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that, I'm lookin' down on you smilin'
And i didn't feel a thang
So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on
Don't mourn, rejoice
Everytime you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that, I'm lookin' down on you smilin'
And i didn't feel a thang
So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back... "

Farewell...

Last seen on Nov 29 2:01 PM. Member since August 10, 2006.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 122 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Take a deep breath, relax, and just start shootin'".
I am a 20 year old guy from New York (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a boyfriend extroidinaire.
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I have 122 comments, 1 contest, 9 addlines

My Poetry

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Summer Breeze

In life just like books
Nothing is quite how it seems

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It's days like these that I can't even breathe
Rendered speechless by your incredible presence

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Mr. Negative

How can I live with Mr. Negative
A pessimist with no desire to forgive

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Eyes of a Killer

Look deep into my eyes
Tell me what you see

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Guest Book

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Never Fall in Love on November 16

when I'm gone - eminem.
Water Color Sky on February 23, 2007

Congrats! Loved your poem.

Ash
darkeningangel on November 5, 2006

hiya
Gothic Butterfly on November 1, 2006

Hey, babe,
Where are you?
I added on to one of your add a line's,

I miss you,
Are we still together?
Brett,

-Breanna