Dawn.of.juliet• Show poetry

poetry is not just a hobby for me, it's truly a tap to sanity at times. when things are way too much, sometimes it's all i have. i'm just trying to find my place in life. i'm really interested in just expanding my efforts and trying to get better each and every day. ♥

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I wrote this and it pretty much sums it all up. Below it is my friend's response which brought me completely to tears.


???...Are You The Girl?


are you the girl who fell, unwillingly, unknowingly?

or are you the girl who knew, and just made a big mistake?

when nothing can be reversed, where will you turn?

when your voice has faded, how will you cry out?

are you the girl who just wanted to try, just to see?

or are you the girl who couldn't help herself, addicted?

when lies float to the surface like a poison, how will you live?

when your source of strength is gone, how will you stand?

are you the girl that just wanted to fit in?

or are you the girl who never wanted to be seen?

when there's nothing left for you, how will you breathe?

when you're all alone, who will dry your tears?


I have seen all these things
unimaginable past has brought me
trembling,
kicking and screaming
to..this..place.

and this is what I have become

so let me ask you:...
are you the girl?


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and this was my friend's response when she read it


I am the girl who fell, unwillingly, unknowingly

when nothing can be reversed, you can turn to me

when your voice is faded, I will scream instead

I am the girl who couldn't help myself, afflicted

when lies float to the surface like a poison, I'll mix the antidote

when your source of strength is gone, I will replenish it

I am the girl that just wanted to fit in

when there's nothing left for you, you will still have me

you are never alone, so let me dry your tears


I have seen all the things
your past has brought you
trembling
kicking, screaming
the blood staining your pretty face

this may be what you have become

but I am the girl
who will help you


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now you tell me,
do i deserve friends like that?

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my favorite movie of all time [yes even more than SAW] is Underworld.. i love vampires lol
sorry just had to add that cuz i just wrote a poem based on that. well.. here.

Underworld

brought down through centuries
a craving for the forbidden
unknown but to this underworld
and all of us alike
with the knowledge of nothing
but hate and bloodlust
run for your life
or you'll never get out

stopped dead
by a single penetrating, icy gaze
a flash of animosity
revealing sharpened immortality
dread flows silently, almost unnoticed
deep inside your cyan veins
as breathing decreases
your soul is unmasked
and your lies like poison

never sink too far
into human emotions
at risk of losing control
don't stray from this path
though entwined in thorns
dripping your only salvation
so take it, and stand once more

x♥x

gotta love it ^^ lol