Welcome to my writing space. My name is SOLS and I just want to share my poetry and stories with the world.
I love to write. I do it all the time when I have spare time. I can write on anything from a piece of paper to a shredded scrap. I'm working on a book at the moment that I might share with some of u fellow writers.
Tell me what u think about my poetry and stories. I like to know what I can improve on or do more of.
Writing and reading is a big part of my life so I'll also read ur stuff and comment.
Sample poem:
No Role Model
Yeah I blame it on society
For our world being in a calamity
Turn around and all I see is tragedy
Some are in the light, but barely
If a person falls all others do is laugh
But oh don't help on my behalf
I shake my head as I see a selfish world
People sit in their own bubbles nice and curled
All I gotta do is "get mine"
As long as I "do me" I'll be fine
This all I ever hear
Slowly down my cheek rolls a tear
I hate to say it, but it must be said
Chilvary is mostly nowadays dead
Can't get it out my head
People used to help each other
That used to be my sister and brother
Now even families are torn apart
It is slowly breaking my heart
Single men and women raising kids
Make me want to pray and close my eyelids
All everyone cares about is money
Let me tell you now it don't taste as sweet as honey
Sucess is more bitter sweet
Cause most got it through deciet
Then the rich feed others in other lands
Not listening to our countries demands
So yeah I blame it on society for not being a good role model
Shout outs to my poetry family.......
---Squizzle
---Q-pid
---Blakdiamon
---Lady Purple
---Mel
---Haze
I love to write. I do it all the time when I have spare time. I can write on anything from a piece of paper to a shredded scrap. I'm working on a book at the moment that I might share with some of u fellow writers.
Tell me what u think about my poetry and stories. I like to know what I can improve on or do more of.
Writing and reading is a big part of my life so I'll also read ur stuff and comment.
Sample poem:
No Role Model
Yeah I blame it on society
For our world being in a calamity
Turn around and all I see is tragedy
Some are in the light, but barely
If a person falls all others do is laugh
But oh don't help on my behalf
I shake my head as I see a selfish world
People sit in their own bubbles nice and curled
All I gotta do is "get mine"
As long as I "do me" I'll be fine
This all I ever hear
Slowly down my cheek rolls a tear
I hate to say it, but it must be said
Chilvary is mostly nowadays dead
Can't get it out my head
People used to help each other
That used to be my sister and brother
Now even families are torn apart
It is slowly breaking my heart
Single men and women raising kids
Make me want to pray and close my eyelids
All everyone cares about is money
Let me tell you now it don't taste as sweet as honey
Sucess is more bitter sweet
Cause most got it through deciet
Then the rich feed others in other lands
Not listening to our countries demands
So yeah I blame it on society for not being a good role model
Shout outs to my poetry family.......
---Squizzle
---Q-pid
---Blakdiamon
---Lady Purple
---Mel
---Haze
- Last seen on Oct 27 12:36 AM. Member since September 13, 2006.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 500 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "You have to trust yourself before you trust others". - I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a lil of everything like keeping my creative mind going with my gift of acting and singing.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/solsthatsme
- I have 500 comments, 5 contests, 150 poems, 3 stories
My Poetry
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At first I didn't know what to do
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My Stories
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haze101 on August 26, 2008you are the most impossible person to read. i can usually flip people open and just start readin but yo book got this big ass lock on it and my skills in lock picken aint that good. idk wat to do with you sahara
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Rebekah-Ann on May 15, 2008Stunning page!!!
Thank you for entering one of my contests. Keep well!
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bruntbeauty on May 3, 2007Hey. You should comment on my poem "Great Fathers" Its amazing =]
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SOLS.Moonlight on October 9, 2006Yeah I added you because u like to write dark stuff and u seem to be a creative person.
