In response to a particular poem..."cannot one make a life change without basing his/her mindset on a higher power? even goals are simple agends, planned out, and the attainment of proper achievement is the reward...so parallels the higher power theory, it becomes a goal, a purpose, a seeking for guidance, and a quest to conquer the negative aspects of opposition...conjoin the two, and you have a stronger focus, on one hand the guider, on the other, the plan, and when utilized properly, the agenda becomes fufilled... "
As far as writing goes, I will never be good enough
to satisfy myself.
Saying that, all criticism is taken well, except for comments that are meant to show you off as better than others.
As far as so-called sensitive subjects, (religion, politics)
I am rather close-minded,
believing what I know to believe.
Romans 12 is quite a read.
Please kindly pay respects to my favorites, for within the smorgasbord of talent located about thier profiles, there may be some reconciliation to any negative premise you may have had about what poetry has become.
That might've been my longest sentence written.
Go Gators.
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- When I'm not writing, I'm freaking miserable.
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