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SORRY
Truth be told, I am the worst person to get a hold of.
In response to a particular poem..."cannot one make a life change without basing his/her mindset on a higher power? even goals are simple agends, planned out, and the attainment of proper achievement is the reward...so parallels the higher power theory, it becomes a goal, a purpose, a seeking for guidance, and a quest to conquer the negative aspects of opposition...conjoin the two, and you have a stronger focus, on one hand the guider, on the other, the plan, and when utilized properly, the agenda becomes fufilled... "

As far as writing goes, I will never be good enough
to satisfy myself.
Saying that, all criticism is taken well, except for comments that are meant to show you off as better than others.

 

As far as so-called sensitive subjects, (religion, politics)

I am rather close-minded,

believing what I know to believe.

Romans 12 is quite a read.

 

Please kindly pay respects to my favorites, for within the smorgasbord of talent located about thier profiles, there may be some reconciliation to any negative premise you may have had about what poetry has become.

 

That might've been my longest sentence written.

 

Go Gators.

 

 

 

 

Poems I'm focused on

  • Ray N.'s 'fro Is Zen
    The balance laughs,
    mocks me to drop.
    71 lines, 1 comment, November 13
  • Birth of A Storm
    A grunting sky
    sweats from clouded temples;
    29 lines, 8 comments, June 13, 2008
  • Sleep apnea
    Rubber button lost on calculator
    along with substantially large index,
    21 lines, 10 comments, May 8, 2008
  • trigger
    Roughing out the framework
    for what might be border-line sopranos,
    30 lines, 13 comments, April 29, 2008
  • sans permission (warning...graphic theme)
    31 lines, 29 comments, April 25, 2008. In Abuse, Adult
  • kitchen...fourish
    Crushing peppers of Chilean region,
    rubbing eyes with wrist to avoid the sting.
    40 lines, 7 comments, April 18, 2008
  • responding to the bruises
    spoken in a whisper
    21 lines, 27 comments, January 22, 2007

My Poetry

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  • the bite
    Growling,
    "You're so salty",
    18 lines, 1 comment, July 26
  • Clank
    Suddenly
    sleet flicks my features,
    48 lines, 1 comment, July 2
  • Tails, you lose.
    Dragged behind matching rayon blends,
    a helpless wagon pulled by waistlines;
    23 lines, 13 comments, June 24

My Stories

  • stopwatch
    seriously, i have never gotten really lost, and yet today i was like, "i dont know where i am". i recognized the street, but not the name of it.i saw sammy, he was like "whats poppin?" i coulda swore ive been to that convinie
    315 lines, 2 comments, February 28, 2008. In <600 words

Guest Book

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  • AngelBellerose on June 25
    thanks Hun for stopping by to read a poem Hugs Angel♥
  • ecrivain01 : Great background ... on June 1, 2008
    are you making these yourself?
  • j-ay rose on May 24, 2008
    ♥

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