Rockin - Rainbow• Show poetry

Hi everyone
Hope you are all ok,
I am loving reading all your poems , they're are sooo great, keep the ink flowing and get those poems into contests, some of them are cretainly award-winning ones!

Please tell me how to improve my poems , and i don't mind critiques. I'm still a learning poet, i only really started poems when i joined AP so i would really appreciate some help if you care. My poems aren't anything spectacular and i'm not a great award-winner. But anyhow i would love it if you would care to comment on them, and i will try to raise my standard.

But thankyou everyone for commenting it is a great help.
Now some inpaticular thankyou's-
A big huge thanks to CrystalClear1000 for introducing me 2 AP and her lovely poem about me!!
And also many thanks to Sky Ireland Prince who has helped me get to know this site well!
Cheeky lil monkey - she's always commenting and being really helpful.

I am looking for an AP family so if you want me in your family please talk to me about it.

Feel free to leave comments! And keep the ink flowing!
Start of my AP family
River Maiden- Nanny
Crystal Clear- The best Sister ever
Cheeky lil monkey- My fab aunt
At the mo im looking for some brothers or sisters or pretty much any1

Quicklyyy just to say!! Im sorry i havnt been on for ages it's been a year since i kept on putting poems on but now im one more year maturer and hopefully ill stay at ap ...x