I wish I could say I have had the perfect life,
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could say that I have been the perfect daughter,
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could say I always followed what I knew I should do,
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could tell you I followed God,
But that would be a lie,
One thing I tell you is true,
Is how much I have grown,
Who I use to be,
And who I am today,
Are 2 different people,
I am learning to live for God,
I am learning to obey,
I am learning to do what I know is right.
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could say that I have been the perfect daughter,
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could say I always followed what I knew I should do,
But that would be a lie,
I wish I could tell you I followed God,
But that would be a lie,
One thing I tell you is true,
Is how much I have grown,
Who I use to be,
And who I am today,
Are 2 different people,
I am learning to live for God,
I am learning to obey,
I am learning to do what I know is right.
- Last seen on Jun 20 4:02 PM. Member since March 16, 2007.
- I'm a aventurine thought poet for 51 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Love is like a roller coaster, the downs may make u sick and hurt, but it makes the highs something extrodinary.".
- I am a 17 year old girl from Georgia (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm hanging out with my husband, texting, taking pictures, school.
- Visit my homepage at www,myspace.com/sjshotchick2193
- I am in the groups Living for God, Real Critiques, Shattered Hearts, abuse victims and survivors and all against abuse
- I have 51 comments
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When I think of my hero, / I don't think of someone who made great accomplishment, / I think of the person themself, / Not what they have d
My Poetry
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Heart broken feels worse than you could imagine, Like a never ending cut on your arm,20 lines, May 2. In Pain, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Personal, Love, My life, Friendship, Longing, Depression
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FaeRae : Keep the Faith on April 11, 2007Your profile is so sad for one so young, but perhaps your youth will give you a headstart for "straightening things out" and recovering from all of the pain. The best part about being as young as you are is that your possibilities are limitless. You are stronger than even you know; the courage it takes to put your life's story up here on AP is a testimonial to that strength. Rely on that strength, draw on it, pull from it. You have chosen the best form of therapy, here with poetry. Many people will comment on "rules" and "forms" and "verse" and "rhyme" and on and on, but I believe that all poetry is a creative outlet and should be subject to individual interpretation less than critiques; particularly in this type of forum. Just let all that pain flow into your pen and then drip right out onto paper. You have a beautiful soul . . . let it grow. Blessings,
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grannyeri on March 18, 2007Welcome to AP. Pleased you have commented, read and written poem already. Feels good to post that first poem and let others know you are a poet. Hope you enter some contests and take some classed from the great site instructors we have here. Keep writing....
