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Like a ghost - is the curtain

in the white light of the morning -

Dancing in the morning

are you there - are you there?

And a shadow - like a sadness

falling all across the garden

Dancing in the garden

are you there, are you there?



Shine on, friend. Goodnight

Why then then darkening of the light



And the leaves at my feet

whisper sounds so familiar -

are you there? Are you there?



Where the clouds pull apart

and the moon changes faces

in the quiet secret places

are you there? Are you there?



-Concrete Blonde*



My Favorite AP Poets:

RunningPickle - She's my cousin and so wonderfully talented. Much love to you KK!

Tiana - I first saw her works in a contest me and my cousin did, she's very inspirational.

DespairKitty - Such a wonderful soul and very kind. Her works are amazing!

Summerstorm - My Aunt, who needs to post more of her stuff! She's great! Much love!

Mystars- My wonderful Mother who only put up two poems and I'm going to shake my fist at her if she doesn't get back on here and put more up. Much love.

Leeche - He has mastered his skill very well and is so inspiring, check him out.

There are many many more, and I will get to the others later when I have more time!



Also I want to give a shout out to my good friend Scott. www.lustedorbusted.com He's under Scrotaye, he's a good guy. Also I'm under Rayven if you want to see the look of the face behind the pen.



*Send your Hopes to the Stars and your Prayers into the Night*






  • Last seen on May 27 12:05 AM. Member since June 20, 2004.
  • I'm a moonstone path poet for 498 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "I'm Sorry If I'm Low and Dirty...".
  • I am a girl from Indiana (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Real Estate Photographer.
  • I have 498 comments, 85 poems, 1 story

My Poetry

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  • Amensalism
    Frozen heart warmed in anguish, left to drip bleed prismatic drops into waiting mouths.
    The voice muted, psychic thoughts divined through
    13 lines, December 11, 2008. In Angst
  • The Organic Machine
    When the moon bathed us in bloodied light
    And we laid on the wrong side of jupiter
    38 lines, October 20, 2008. In Angst love
  • 'Wreck'uiem
    Combat nausea with another chomp at the nicotine bit.
    Coffee so hot it puts Ronald's warm piss to shame.
    26 lines, September 3, 2008. In Angst
  • Unforgivable
    He sat silently on the embankment, waiting, watching with old copper colored eyes. The darkness stirred like leaves in fall, swirling around, spinning in tangled webs of silk, reminding him of her hair. She step
    12 lines, June 28, 2008

My Stories

Guest Book

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  • Ted E Bare on September 12, 2006
    You are to put your Precious Rain Girl poem in the following contest:

    Precious Rain Girls ext C allpoetry.com/poem/2228749
  • jaunty pill on April 29, 2006

    Hello. Recently I have decided to hold a
    contest as an " Invite only ". I have been reading
    your poems for quite awhile and thought this
    would be a good way of getting to know you better
    as a writer. I would very much appreciate an entry.
    It will aid in the hope to extend my commenting
    on other writers , Such as yourself.

    allpoetry.com/contest/1932350

    Thanks for your time .
    James

    P.S. If you would not like your name
    included on the contest list , Please IM me
    and I'll remove it. I don't want to offend
    anyone by this contest or make anyone
    uncomfortable.
  • Ted E Bare on January 21, 2006
    Rayven,

    I wanted to personally you on this National Day (21 January). May you be blessed with many s and pass them on to make someone else feel blessed too!

    Many s,

    Ted E.
  • Rayven on January 25, 2005
    Aww Thank you so much Despair I hope everything is well with you too!

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