Raven-Madison• Show poetry

Hey every one! i'm a writer and i love writing poems and books. i'll be posting some on here so go ahead and check 'em out and let me know what you think!! i am looking forward to hearing what you have to say bout my writting.

i believe that writting is another way of expressing your self. when words from the mouth fail you, words from the heart sum it up. you can do anything you want, be anyone you choose, when your writting. it's what comes from you, and i believe that when a person writes something, it doesn't need to be fixed or changed, because when u write something, it's what you want to say, and nobody shoud try to speak for you. and if any of you need me to read something of yours and give you feed back, i will. because i'm a straight forward person. so if i dont like it i'll tell you and i'll tell you why.
if i do like it i'll tell you and i'll tell you why. its great to have people that share the same interests and passions as you, and i believe that this is one of those sights where you can find people like that.

i have five basic catagories for the poems i read the first, which is the worst, wel not worst but, thebottom of the list or # 5 anyway is good. if i put good it means i liked it and it was worth reading and im ight occasionally wonder to your page to see if you have anything better. this would be your F, and it gets no applause.

the fourth, is great. this means i really liked it, and i think you have skill, and potential. you could prbably use a little more work though. this would be your D, and it gets 1 applause.

the third is amazing. though this sounds like it should be first, lol, it's not. this just means that i know you have ptential and your putting it to good use. if it were grading u could say that this would be a C or average. this gets 2 applause

the second, or B lol, is interesting. this simply means that i loved you poem i will definatly be looking forward to more, and that you have the skill and talent and you know how to use them, maybe a little rusty around the edges, but pretty good over all. this gets 3 applause.

and the first one, or A+ lol, would be meaning ful. this means that your poem acually meant something to me. that it was insightfull, and i came away from it with a new outlook, or i could undersand something i couldnt before. it opened something for me, and i would be hugging you if i could. this is the very best thing i could say about apoem, and if you aske me to read yous, this is how you want me to comment it. this also gets 3 applause.

This is just the way my system works. you dont like it too bad.

So good luck poets, and keep up the writting. once again i will read anyones if they ask me, and i am always here if someone needs to talk, im a great listener.


Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Yavie Aelinel, IwuvMyKenshyPoo, Heidiplease, iNsOmNiAc BiLlIe JoE lOvEr,Mina the Mischevious, SnowNeko, KylaMizuki, SkyeEyesSparkle7135, Ms.Misery.SouthernSecrets15. ChristinaXCuriosity, SecretButterfly, SilverRain09, Blood.Stained.Tears, Falling Star, Jackie 12,XxXDeath-WishXxX, Bella Cullen,xxvampyregirlxx, Poetryblitz727, XxLovedxX,

ok so this column thingy is just to show who al is in my possy and under my official protection. if your not listed it's cause your not in. but its not personal. and this isnt like on of those exclusive things we think were better than any of you, we're not you just cant be in my posy unless there's a damn good reason. so here we are!

justakid-ross
xlilcutie12399lx-alyssa
xxcruentusangelusxx-bryan
lilvampireyen-yen


if you're not on here and you think you should me, then talk to me and we'll figure something out.

this if for anyone who has EVER been hurt by any man. we thank you asshole for making us the people we are today!


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We thank you for breaking our hearts, because now we know what kind of guy you were, and we''ll be sure to stay away from your kind in the future. if you're the kind of person who wants a REAL man thats there for you, and acually MEANS what he says copy this to your page.



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---|||---|||---You Know
----\\\-///----Someone
-----\\///-----Who Died
------///\-----Of
-----///\\\----Cancer


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[[ Put This On Your Page If you Were Abused Or Are Against Any Form Of It! ]]


♥_♥_♥___♥_♥_ Put this
♥___♥_♥___♥ heart
_♥___♥___♥_ on your
__♥_____♥__ page if
___♥___♥___ you love
____♥_♥____ someone
_____♥_____ very much

ok so i said i would start my blog thingy on here so that you all would know what i was up to.

me, the girl on the move. now that school has started up again, im so glad! i finally have a routine down. get up chill out go to my classes, go to my practices, go to my college classes, thingsare so much easier. now i do have a new dilema, i havent forgot about my family ross and his father james, although by the looks of things id say they forgot about me, but no thats not it. so i feel bad cause not too long ago i got out this really shitty relationship with a guy that doesnt give a flying fart about me. me and my friends used to be good enough but now that hes popular and got all his new friends who cares about us right? yea and on top of that im really stressed out, but i dont complain. anyway, so im not going to see my older brother for a long time, and my little brother is really annoying me here lately. he's just all clingy, not that i dont love him, i do, but jeez! i need some space here too. anyway. so now im just sitting at home, again im never at home so this is almost a day off for me, im tired and sore and yea. really hungry. lol so basically things are far from perfect, but now that i have my friends around me and i finally have more answers, you know what? i think i can live with that.