PureRomance• Show poetry

Hello there friends! I appreciate your thoughts and comments on my work. However, if you find anything that I need to fix, please instant message me with your critique.

Here is a list of what I think to be some of my best. I hope you enjoy. If you come across any that you'd like for me to add to my list feel free to sign my guestbook with the title and what you'd like to say about it and I will add it to this growing list.

Read My Writing Some Of My Best:

*Sorry Didn't Do It nominated by one of really close friends on here KnightOfTheRose"because it is an accurate depiction of how cruel and beautiful love can be. It shows how those you love can hurt you but your love can endure even that. A true masterpiece." * A Lover's Prayer nominated by My AP Mom azure85"A poem that describes the desire for their heart's desire that would be cherished and returned, written as a prayerful request for God."
* Love nominated by my bro midnightblue1272 "This is what love should be all about!" Nuff said.
* Raindrops nominated by my AP Sis CascadingSakura: "A vivid portrait of life's beginning, full of imagery and emotion."
* I Give...My All nominated by michaelline: "It is my dream and deapest wish that every one should be so loved and so honest about their love for another. That you got to the heart of every one's deepest wish of being cared about as deeply as you cared about the person to whom you spoke to.That you used the perfect words to descibe what you felt and showed true poetry the way it is meant to be."
* The Daisy was nominated by Kissing-Darkness : "I nominate this poem so much feeling and emotion just beautiful "
* Why No Tears Are Falling was nominated by Live4FandFs : "With such talent, I don't see your AP name doing justice to you, wish such a beautiful writing, you are definitely to be noticed... this is a very heartfelt poem and got to just love the love... I can so relate to this one and finally I understand why no tears are falling.. I love it, the flow is great with a perfect touch of rhyming scheme and the topic of love and pain are always fresh... you've captured emotions very well in your lines making pain a beautiful concept... On personal note, you will find the one who will stay with you, it's just that we often fail love, love never fails us, it's always there to embrace us... take care Minoo"

*A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road.. Girl: Slow down. I’m scared. Guy: No, this is fun. Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary! Guy: Then tell me you love me. Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down! Guy: Now give me a BIG hug. *Girl hugs him* Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me. (In the paper the next day) A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die. If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page asap!!

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~ My AP Family ~  

My AP Mom:

azure85

She's an amazing poet and great person. Love & Hugs Mom My Ap Aunt:

Aunt Riftkin
She's such a great Aunt to me. She's got brilliant poetry as well. I enjoy reading hers and my other ap family's so much. My AP Uncle:

Uncle Dave

Uncle Dave is a great guy. I've even wrote a poem with him before. He's great with giving advice and I enjoy reading his stuff as well. My AP Wife & Soulmate:


My AP Sisters :

Angel Of Heaven99
She is such a very talented poetess and I love her work extremely. She's such a very talented writer and a great AP Sis. Love yas. Xxbodybagx
Katy
She is such a sweetheart. She's a great friend. Cares alot for alot of people and she sure knows how to make someone happy when they're feeling sad & blue. My AP Brothers:

midnightblue1272
Pirate Of The East
Jeremy0826
Griswold

~My AP Best Friends~


b19dudett92
Searra

My Pirate Neighbor:

DrunkenRam


Please take a look at some of my poetry. I have worked hard and would love to have some feedback. Thanks for visiting and taking the time to read my work


"To dream is one thing, but to live a dream that you've awaited to come true is a real blessing & has happened to me"

A Little info about me. My name is Jöel. I'm 29 I live in WV where I was raised in Hurricane W.Va. I'm 5'4 I love to write poetry. I've been writing poetry since I was 7 years old. I would greatly appreciate anyone who views this page to be so kind as to check out some of my poetry. I'm always wanting more friends. I've got yahoo, aim & msn. If you've got one of those you can add me to the following:

AIM: doyle2367
Yahoo: ynot4u2hold
MSN: ynot4u2hold@hotmail.com

I love to write. Mostly what I write about is love, passion, heart break, friendship and every now and then a spiritual one. Well, if you would like to know more about me don't hesitate to ask me. I'm currently in a very special relationship that means alot to me.


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