SOUL ENSLAVERY
I am standing at the edges
of the lives I might have taken,
and I'm listening to probable paths
selling their perspectives.
I have travelled quite the distances
to see my own reflection,
though, all I've found is someone else
is looking in from out.
Pain is reigning down upon
the houses of the honored,
and the robes are muddied, bloodied, torn,
and far from recognition.
As our vessels grew and changed beyond
the limits we had given,
I am sinning and I'm saving us
from all we might have been.
I am standing back in Eden with
the Eve of my disaster.
I'd gone back in to the grave where I'd first
found my introspection.
I've returned, again, from saving us
from being our own masters;
but when I went to cut the branches off,
I saw you looking in from out.
Alright, I put anything not completely horrid on this site, which means that some of the near-horrid pieces see the light of day here. My best works, in my opinion, are: Imagination, Adam, Narcissus Awakening, and A Deity Within Me. Explore the others at your own risk, as many are years old.
I am standing at the edges
of the lives I might have taken,
and I'm listening to probable paths
selling their perspectives.
I have travelled quite the distances
to see my own reflection,
though, all I've found is someone else
is looking in from out.
Pain is reigning down upon
the houses of the honored,
and the robes are muddied, bloodied, torn,
and far from recognition.
As our vessels grew and changed beyond
the limits we had given,
I am sinning and I'm saving us
from all we might have been.
I am standing back in Eden with
the Eve of my disaster.
I'd gone back in to the grave where I'd first
found my introspection.
I've returned, again, from saving us
from being our own masters;
but when I went to cut the branches off,
I saw you looking in from out.
Alright, I put anything not completely horrid on this site, which means that some of the near-horrid pieces see the light of day here. My best works, in my opinion, are: Imagination, Adam, Narcissus Awakening, and A Deity Within Me. Explore the others at your own risk, as many are years old.
- Last seen on Nov 6 2:08 AM. Member since January 13, 2006.
- I'm a opaline dream poet for 862 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "EYE AM".
- When I'm not writing, I'm perceived as seperate from the collective.
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My Poetry
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Autumn's roses are brown. Broken, yellowing, crispy124 lines, June 28, 2008
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There is a rusted machine in the floral rubble. There is a dislodged gear in the human machine.13 lines, June 24, 2008
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mysticshrooms on May 6, 2007wow man your really damn good
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ElevateEmotion on December 23, 2006roar, whats new?
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SilencefillsMySoul on March 24, 2006Very well written. I completely agree with you. I thank you for giving your wonderful poem as an insight to those of us who have yet to understand what life is all about.
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Pinkypants on March 16, 2006
nice page by the way :grin:
