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I am just a poetess who writes what I feel. Although these days hopelessly blocked, I still like to experiment with different forms and styles. I am always interested in hearing from my fellow poets what can be improved in my writing, so critique away! Also I am told that my commenting is pretty good, so if you have anything you would like me to read and critique, just drop me a line, and I will do what I can.

I am divorced. and the proud momma of two children, a daughter age 14, and a son age 12. They live with their father right now, but they are my life, my heart, my soul, and my greatest source of joy.

I like to think that I have learned a few lessons along the way. I live each moment as if it were the last of my life, cherishing everything, both joyful and sorrowful. I thrive on feeling, hearing, touching, experiencing, and just drinking in everything the world has to offer.

I hope to someday be able to do for others, what was once done for me. When I am not working, I can usually be found out and about with my camera close by. I am a photography enthusiast, though extremely amateur. Some of my favorite material is the sea, which has been my faithful companion my entire life. Although constantly in motion, it is the one thing in my life that never disappoints me. I guess you can say I live the life of a typical starving artist...Slave to the passions that rule me!








My Poetry

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  • Moments pass, melting into hours. Lion chilled air prickles her exposed flesh.
    34 lines, March 22
  • Hypnotic waves lapped gently barely kissing the heart pine
    84 lines, January 26
  • As I sit here, separated from my legacy, my tears become my ink.
    84 lines, 1 comment, January 26
  • Under a thousand rose petals
    scented with desire.
    23 lines, 3 comments, January 17

My Stories

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Visitor Book

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  • Frodofan on October 5, 2005
    You are a fantastic writer! Your poems are so good, especially since they rhyme. They are all so very captivating with such a well choice of words!
  • wbiro on August 6, 2005
    Many happy congratulations on your publishing experience, Ms. truth!!! A poetic autobio is not something that is seen everyday! and a good title, too! mine would probably be "I, Writer"! ) I hope the book helps you get through any tough days you may have, and may it be critically acclaimed!!!
    Edited on Aug 06, 9:11 because 'it needed it!'.
  • g r e y i s m on June 11, 2005
    'I believe that my life is to be lived to Honor and Obey God. This is achieved by caring for all fellow humans, and helping wherever, whomever, and whenever I can.'

    I wish everyone who professed a belief in God knew this truth.
  • PowerOfLove on May 31, 2005
    Dear Tobi,
    I am thrilled for you that you are going to be published, isn't it amazing how God can bring fruit out of our sufferings, and lemonade out of our lemons.
    Your poetry and comments are inspiring and creative.
    Take care,
    Heather

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