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Music

Close my eyes
Song swallows me whole
Melody takes me far away
To freedom

World around
Lost to me and I to it
Fly past stars on wings of sound
Body left behind

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ummm... i dunno what it is, but i thought it sounded cool. thanks for reading
Written November 30th, 2004

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  • April Renee
    January 24, 2005
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    very nice. music is a good obsession to have, i think. good job with writing it. enjoyed.

    Blu

  • January 17, 2005
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    this poem sounds so much like you and your obsession with music. hehe, good write!

  • TheTrickster
    December 29, 2004
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    Oooh! I bookmarked it! I love it! This is exactly the way I feel about music!! Wow!!

    Love and hugs,
    TheTrickster

  • -Silent-Tears-
    December 2, 2004
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    AwEsOmE!

    oh woah this is absolutely amazing!!! i feel like that all the time when i listen to music.. its a really awesome write!!! it says so much in only two stanza and thats whats amazing abou tit its so strong and i can totally relate on this one.. its just wow im speechless lol cause i feel the exact same way when im listening to music.. but anywa ill shut up. awesome write keep writing!!!!