I lost you once before my love
How can I loose you again?
The chances I blew my dove
How can I choose to refrain?
Does your heart not ask why?
Because my soul cries out for an answer.
Does your breath not want to cry?
Because my spirit smiles like a dancer.
My baby angel and one true love
I waited to long to tell you my story.
My butterfly in the sky above
I set you free to morning glory.
I'm sorry I continued to hurt you
When all was said and done.
I apologise for mistakes anew
Now go and return to the sun.
Author notes
This poem was written for Tania. I wrote 3 previous poems about her. She inspired me to write again and write some of the best poems I've ever written. We broke up in August/September.
Written November 15th, 2004
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very sweet! and so many pet names! wow!! write on....
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i luv all da different words/names you have used to describe Tania...by da sounds of it...u sounded like u were a great couple. luvin da rhyme
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i can relate very nice and inspiring -
wunderbar
this is a wonderful poem. i really love the dual rhyme style. it's hard to pull off without sounding stupid, but you made it work very well. it didnt sound cheesy at all, and i really like that. this write can apply to a lot of things and lots of people will identify with that. great work. again, i love the structure. it is perfect.
stephanie rose -
awwwww- i feel exactly like this. I split wi ma ex like a week ago so its raw and fresha nd hurts like holy shit. i miss him so well done crystal xxx
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Really liked this * return to the sun* Love that!
Thanks for sharing.'
Leaf
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