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There she stands

On the top of the mountain I saw her stand
Maybe she is from a far away land.
From a thousand miles I hear her sing
The closer I get the more it sting.

Oh it must be the love below
Maybe she is the one who is aglow.
From a million stars she shines so bright
The closer I get I start to loose my sight.

Oh my love where have you gone?
Maybe you seek too hard to belong.
From my deepest heart divine
The closer I get to you I feel you’re mine.

Author notes

Tania inspired the last 3 poems I've written. This is the 3rd and final one as we've just broken up.
Written August 1st, 2004

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  • MariGoes gold member
    September 19, 2004
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    Sorry to hear about that
    But this poem is so nice, and the loving tune you put in your words accentuates the feelings of wanting.
    I enjoyed it, thanks!

    Mari
    Edited on Sep 23, 4:24 p.m. because ''.