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Diamond Princess

My precious darling daughter that came to me one day
sought me out with loving words and asked me if I would play
the role of her father for it was a place needing to be filled
her mom and I already engaged, told her I would be thrilled
so for my diamond princess, a lovely supergirl, belated Happy Birthday

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option #3 for Princess Kiara
Written October 4th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Grey Mouser
    October 9, 2006
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    My sweetheart, my living dream! I do so thank you for these great thoughts, they do grow up to fast and I am happy we will get to watch that happen! We do have a very remarkable young daughter.
    Love,
    Mouser

  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thank you for witting something so lovely and sweet to a beautiful little girl. She is amazing in her wonder and her kindness. Her sweet child like behavor is such a joy. I hate to see here grow up too fast, but I love that we will be a part of it.
    You have a very special daughter.
    Bless you!

  • MaaiL
    October 6, 2006
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    Lovee u! :D

    Awwww daddy! This is so Wonderful.. I love it! Thank You for such beautiful lines.. Especially these ones-

    I would be thrilled
    so for my diamond princess, a lovely supergirl, belated Happy Birthday

    Thanks alot daddy! I loveeee you and take care always!

    Lotsa Luv
    Your AP Daughter,
    **$h@/\/\z**

  • Grey Mouser
    October 5, 2006
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    Thank you Sir for your wonderful comments. Of her I am proud to no end for this charming young lady. Appreciate your time and applause.

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 5, 2006
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    Aww. This is just wonderful stuff. I really enjoyed reading this. How proud you must be. Great write.

  • Grey Mouser
    October 4, 2006
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    Tes, thanks dear. She deserves every bit of it too. I am happy to do this for her.
    :
    Dave

  • Angels Delight
    October 4, 2006
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    Dave...

    Luv this is just simply beautiful...I wish I could say more but hey you know I love ya...Thanks for sharing my friend

    Love ya loads
    Tes
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