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I am......confused

lost, unsure, no direction
up? down? left or right?
do I sing or talk or say
nothing at all

fear sets in
I am......unsure
what to do?

panic, heart racing
palms sweaty
vision no longer black or white
shapes have no outline
all is fading to grey
faculties are led astray

I am.....confused


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Written August 27th, 2006

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  • Frogzter gold member
    August 28, 2006
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    A perfect description of confusion... You have presented it well. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
    frog

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    August 28, 2006
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    Merry meet Frozentearz,
    I'm glad that you enjoyed my entry. I had a whole list of things I could put in but I thought that might be too...confusing Thanks again.

    Amythest

  • Frozentearz gold member
    August 28, 2006
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    Well now I loved this line Faculties are led astray..
    we sure do become confused when these things happen.
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts on confusion.
    well done.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz