it was not my intention, but
my rage took over
woven in an intricate pattern with my
continual disappointment and
abuse, your suffering, I do not
regret, the only dismay I feel is
that you died too soon. Do you
think that is selfish of me?
Oh, wait you can no longer answer
Author notes
Written August 18th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Macabre Medicines! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended August 24, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for entering my contest, I like this poem, It is very blunt and to the point, and the ending really took it out with a blow, I like the way its all asking rhetorical questions and It has a very eerie feel to it,
best of luck in the contest,
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Merry meet,
Thank you for commenting on my poem. I wrote this from a "slightly" insane serial killer's point of view.
Thank you for commenting again.
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I always comment on my entries
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I do also, but I always like to acknowledge when a person has taken the time to comment on one of my poem, even the contest holder.
Amythest
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Merry meet,
Thank you for reading my poem. Yea, it does end rather abruptly or someone, anyway.
Thank you again for reading and commenting on my poem.
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That was a cold ending to a sad story, BRAVO. Nice job, though short it told a vivid story/ Thanks for entering.
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Merry meet,
Thank you for your applause and for your nice comments.
Amythest -
great
wow!! really nice job omg!!!
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