May Peace be in your heart
May Peace be in your body
May Peace be in your mind
May Peace be in your family
May Peace be in your friends
May Peace be in your animals
May Peace be in your neighbours
May Peace be in your town
May Peace be in your country
May Peace be in your continent
May Peace be in your planet
May Peace be in your universe
May Peace be
May be
Be
Author notes
Written July 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- peace-blessings ... pay-it-forward ... for all by maa.
333 points, ended August 7, 2006, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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So be it and love will truly shine
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yes!
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thank you, erin, for your appreciation and support! thank you also for pointing toward the single word at the end, which sounds like going from multiplicity to unity.
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this is nice. i admit it is a little hard to read because of its repetitive nature, but the message is clear and beneficial to all. simple is definitely not always bad. i also like how it gets shorter at the end, to show that peace is a much more simple idea than people tend to understand.
~erin rosalee
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thank you, crapaud, for your kind support and appreciation. i will look at your page, because i never see the writing of a crapaud.
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As with the prior comments this does come over as a rather beautiful chant.
I think it is very good.
Good luck in the contest and always.
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dear brother rod, thank you very much for your support and sweetheart's echo. thank you for your advice which points toward the eternal present. although i appreciate your suggestion, for respecting the topic of the contest which invites to write a "blessing", my feeling is inclined to keep the "may be peace..." formulation. though it maintains the illusion of becoming, it sounds more comprehensible as a fulfillment wish, for those who are not familiar with non-dual perspectives.
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Brother jean-marc, I have to echo my sweet lady's sentiment. This presents a beautiful chant, encantation, chanson....I would only change it by say:
Peace IS in your heart,
Peace IS in your body....
Be peace, my bright brother! -
very dear maa, thank you so much for your kind encouragement and support. i know as much you love creativity for yourself and your close relatives. your own creativity is an example for all of us. so thank you also for bringing such a refreshing way of life, which liberates from the burden of memory and invites to open ourselves to the natural current of love and sharing.
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you know, sweetheart, I actually find your style of poetry quite unique ! no kidding ...
I love poems that even a little child can understand, and all the great sages and wise ones have always spoken in simple words, haven't they ?
so now you have to get some courage and confidence to express yourself in english, in your particular way, because no matter the form it will take, your message will reach the hearts of those who are meant to be touched by your wisdom and love.
much love to you,
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thank you very much, dear ea!
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thank you very much, sahdana (a nice name which reminds me something...). peace and blessings also at your intention.
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very nice, j-m!
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as i was reading this i began chanting the message in heartsong presented here-well done! peace & blessings
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thank you very much, wolfheart, for your kind feedback. no, i don't think there is any name to such a form. i have not a wide vocabulary in english, and don't know how to write poems in rhyme.
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nicely done
Very nice! This form, is it called a certain thing? It certainly looks impressive. As to your words, beautiful... you have blessed us with your write.
hugs WolfHeart
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