run away, if you can,
arriving in the night,
on the stalk, following the prey,
driving to the slaughter,
knives sharp as razors,
cutting the throat,
cackling with demented glee,
the victim sinks into oblivion
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Written July 9th, 2006
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I think it's interesting. A little hard to decode though, but very nice, a very good read. I was however, a little disapointed with saying the knife was a sharp as a razor...I mean..it's a knife..but hey, other than that, ver good.
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very interesting....good imagery!
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good
Are you projecting a mad killer..any way well done -
Short and sweet-I mean short and--------. I loved it. Sounds like Minneapolis. RobinRae.
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Merry meet crystal bradford,
Thank you for your kind applause. I was thinking of werewolves (my daughter, bella lycanthrope is really into werewolves), but your probably right about that in the big cities too. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting.
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wow this is evil and ominous and probably happening in detriot right now. I like it because it is dark and brings forth the end. I also like the way it flows and it is a rather neat poem with so little lines.
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