Filled with hate,
hands crushed the throat,
it wasn't enough,
grabbing a knife,
stabbing over and over,
gore flying everywhere,
the need to kill is overwhelming,
the smell of death fill nostrils,
small prick of the needle,
cures those with the need to kill.
Author notes
This is Option #1.
The words used in the following order: hate, crushed, gore, kill, death, needle, cure.
Written July 9th, 2006
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very good, normally it's the teen that explodes, me being a teen i know, but this is great!!!
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Merry meet fptemujin,
Thank you for reading my poem. I am actually not a violent person, I just have a teen in the house. They can help to raise your blood pressure. 
Amythest -
eesh, remind me never to get you all mad n bothered ever
this was a really well done poem, word banks are pretty hard to work with sometimes. Good luck in the contest! 
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