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Beautiful

'Give me Tetsiauga'

'Filthy Half-breed'

'Get out of my way'

Simple words
Replay in my head
Even after this day

Many times it was tried
And many times it failed
Such brute strength
But beauty divined
Many subjects hailed

Faster than a rumor
Stronger than stories told
Of a hansom, young demon Lord
An angel, but cold

A young girl named Rin
Followed by him
Each day
Although he's a solid
Shell on the outside
He has a heart, some say

His father, Inutashio
Entrusted the gift of life
No one ever thought he could use it
He'd rather bring strife

But then how is Rin here
Kagome would ask the gang
It would seem that even rocks
Have love behind a fang

Inuyasha was brash, but bold
But sometimes took it to far
But his elder brother was a different tale
His words, seemed at par

A great dog-demon form
His arm is missing though
Somewhere lost within the earth
Deep down within the burrow

Silky tresses snake down
To his muscular waist
Strong and brave, a protector
From all below his taste

Dressed in only white
With just a simple pink
He looks sometimes like angel
But always makes me think

I'm embarrassed to say
My heart burns for him
But my love must give its due
I'm human; I'll never be with him
My beautiful Lord Sesshomaru.

Author notes

If you haven't guessed it's all thee things that I love and some others need I say, about him. I've missed quite a few episodes, but I'm reading all the books. So I know quite a lot about the beautiful Lord Sesshomaru. I loved this contest idea. I hope this works.
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • theslayer
    July 8, 2006
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    Told ya! Your's was better than mine.. You got an honourable mention in McMathew's contest! You Rock! Good luck in MinaMunoko's contest too!
  • MinaMunoko
    July 8, 2006
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    Wow I LOVE Sesshomaru. He's so cool. Great write andgood luck in my contest!

  • RMMcPherson
    July 8, 2006
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    This was really good. I used to watch Inuyasha all the time. Sesshomaru wasn't one of my favorite characters, but he was pretty cool. I like how you told about both sides of him and some background info as well. Good luck in the contest. Only 4 people entered for this option, so you have a 25% chance of getting honorable mention I've gotten more points now, so honorable mentions and the top 3 will get points

  • Rose Darkest Night
    July 7, 2006
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    lol

    lol...but i like having OWSD...it's fun!!!! and he's sexy! lol
  • theslayer
    July 7, 2006
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    Written by a die hard Inu Yasha fan...truly!

    Sis! Awesome write here! And you still havent been treated for the OWSD??? You should really... lemme take you to a doc ( or wud you prefer a monk from the land of Inu Yasha?) ... He's evil... that Sesshomaru.. I'm not gonna let my lil sis be taken away by him.. You can be pisd at me Keni.. but NO Sesshomaru for you!

    Duhhhhh... kidding! Sesshomaru.. He's a Demon with honour.. A demon who keeps his word.. I kinda think he's awesome too.. Cool fella.. And you mentioned me in your Author's Comments... So sweet.. thanks!

    K u said mine was better than yours... Thats a wrong statement there.. Your's is as good as mine ... if not more..You rock!

    PS: For those of you wondering what OWSD is.. Its Obsessed With Sesshomaru Disorder! Somebody help my sis!

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