growing,
present breathing,
joyful, conscious living,
blissful dance of loving sharing,
dying.
Author notes
option 2
Written May 28th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- New members contest - May 2006 by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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thank you, stacy! yes, maybe less we say, more we live... your kind welcome is enchanting. thank you for it!
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It might be a "storyless story" but I think there's some hidden truth to it. This is a nicely done cinquain.
Thanks for entering, and welcome to the site.
Best wishes in the contest,
Stacy
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thank you very much, john, for your kind welcome and support.
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This was a wonderfully written cinquain. You have done a masterful job with the form in how it is “supposed” to be written. Nicely done.
~ John
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thank you very much, babyalah, for your warm comment and welcome. thank you also for sharing on your page the beauty of your so nice daughter!
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thank you, cookiezeal for your comment and your kind advice! i will try to pay attention of using the "ing's".
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thank you very much, patricia, for your kind comment and support. it is very welcome!
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I enjoyed the way this had such vivid energy. A cinquain should have that since it's so short. Good luck in the contest and welcome to AllPoetry. Patricia
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Very nice! Use the dance in a poem, and suddenly the readers' eyes lift with light!
Good application to the theme. (a few more i-n-g's than I would use, but good nonetheless.)
Welcome to the site! Warmly, CookieZeal
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A nice story from start to the end. For little words, it says so much. Good luck in the contest
Welcome to the AP site
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thank you very much, raspberry, for your kind welcome and support!
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such lovely cinquains.. nice to see new poet marvel themselves with this form poetry. Good luck in the contest
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thank you, vickie, for your kind comment! i will try to follow your advice, and keep my eyes open, also when they are closed.
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This was a fun read! Upbeat and light hearted~thank you for participating in the contest. Welcome to All Poetry~vj
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thank you very much, kei-aira, for your kind welcoming and support.
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thank you, kristy, for your comment, welcoming and appreciation. when there are not too many words, it is easier to get their taste.
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Very nice.. there is no favorite part for me to point out here.. I loved every word.. Thank you for sharing and following the contest rules. Best of luck to you and welcome to AP
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Hi. Welcome to AllPoetry.
this cinquain is very well written and you use some lovely images here.
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thank you, leander, for your appreciation of the inner poverty, and for offering to beginners an opportunity of expressing !
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Absolutely wonderful that you managed to embed this journey of life within the few syllables you only got to fill This is an excellent cinquain that you've written here - really enjoyed it!
thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and for following all the rules
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thank you very much, joyce, for expressing your joy about this story of nothing.
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thank you very much, thistle, for your kind welcome !
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Sooooooo True!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A lovely cinquain based on the circle of life. You truly brought life full circle with very few words. The imagery was marvelous. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Welcome to All Poetry and enjoy your time spent on this great site. Joyce
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Very nice cinquain that sort of captures the dance of life. I enjoyed reading it.
Best of luck in the contest and welcome to AllPoetry
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