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Boorish Behavior

My aversion to you should not seem offensive.
Tis your boorish behavior that is annoying.
There is nothing you can do to commensurate
for the dissension that you sow with great exuberance.

Nothing so futuristic would gratify me,
than to see your haughty remarks cause your downfall.
If I were you, I would be more judicious in mixed
company before opening your mouth to speak.

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Written May 18th, 2006

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  • Frozentearz gold member
    May 20, 2006
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    Well now not only a poem with the words
    but a point made,
    clearly what you wanted to say was put forth
    with an easy flow.
    well done
    Tearz

  • Frogzter gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Very nice usage of the word bank and in only two stanzas... incredible! Thanks for entering and best wishes!
    Frog