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Timeless being

By living without future, the hope vanishes.
By living without future, the fear vanishes.
By living without future, the past vanishes.
By living without future, the I vanishes.
By living without future, love arises.
By living without future, freedom is.
By living without future, I am.

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  • jean-marc silver member
    May 23, 2006
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    thank you, ellis, for always reminding us that love is everything. if i don't mistake, rabindranath tagore said : "love is the ultimate meaning of the world"...

  • Ellis gold member
    May 23, 2006
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    Beautiful Poem jean-marc

    Time is key here
    The present we live
    Future holds no fear
    Here when love we give

    --Ellis

  • jean-marc silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    thank you very much, leander, for your message and kind welcoming. my own feeling likes repetitions, for we need to often repeat who we are in order to not taking us for who we are not.

  • leander gold member
    May 20, 2006
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    You have something that is quite thought-provoking here and overall I like the message you radiated within the lines...
    I'm not really a fan though of repetitions, but then again, that's my personal opinion
    thank you for sharing this one with us and welcome to the site!

  • jean-marc silver member
    May 13, 2006
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    dear beloved heart, thank you also for being what you are, and for enlightening my life by your graceful presence and irreducible joy.

  • maa gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    dear sweetheart, I just wanted to be the first to applaud and encourage your poetry, as you are always the first to encourage and support whatever I do. I really love this poem of yours which perfectly reflects your spirit. I am very blessed to have you as a husband with me. thank you for enlightening my life. your "funny elf" el meeree, marion, mariananda ... well, whatever you like ... "no-name" maybe ?
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