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My History

I remember the good times and the bad times
I remember the excitement I caused when
I was brought home new
People came over to see me
I was dressed in lace or brightly colored cloth
Hmpf, they still didn't use me for the
First two weeks, not even a vase of flowers

Finally, my newness wore off, then I was in use
For meals, school work, office work and even crafts
I remember my first holiday meal, I don't remember the holiday but
The food was piled so high that you couldn't see the festive
Cloth and lace I was dressed in
They were laughing and chattering, yep, those were good times
They even got new Silver and Crystal goblets to use with
Fine and expensive wines
I was really proud that day, I stood straight and strong
No bowing in the middle from me

I also remember the fights, as well
Words spoken in anger, fists or palms hitting me
The doors that were slammed, the tears that landed on me as
I gave the only comfort I could

How many generations have passed since I was first bought and sold
I have no idea, more than I can count
I feel old and weary now, my varnish is all chipped and
I'm not as steady as I was once, my legs are cracked and worn
I sit outside now, covered dirt and pots, no more
Bright cloths or lace for me,  my top is warped
I won't be around much longer sitting here outside
That's okay though, I've had a long and for the most
A happy life and I have my memories.....

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Written May 3rd, 2006

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  • XTheSoundOfSilenceX
    August 22, 2006
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    Very good write. Well Done all and all. This poem is exactly what a conversation poem should be. But I think it lacks a little originality. I like the part where you talked about it catching the tears. that was new and exsiting. and i do think you worked hard on this. Very good.

  • Glenda L Hand
    May 8, 2006
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    Nice job and good choice of objects. This contest is going to be hard to judge. I like the way you personified the table. May have been a little better if the stanza were more even and less tell and more show. Great job though.

  • Glenda L Hand
    May 3, 2006
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    Thank you for your entry. It's well thought out.