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Sinatra, Chocolate and Love

The cherry blossoms had spread their scent through the neighborhood Where we had walked hand in hand. We headed for that little sidewalk Bistro you like and had some tea, you were a wonderful date.  Your dark Good looks made me shiver in desire as your touch was electrifying to
My skin.  Your witty comments were charming and urban.

Sinatra sang "New York, New York", accompanied by a piano softly in
The background.  We talked and you kissed me.  Stars exploded and
Fire consumed my body.  I knew that you felt it too, your stiffen
Desire apparent against my body. Feeding each other that last chocolate
Truffle, we caressed with our eyes.  The banter of your place or mine
Was turning into an evening of desire.  We've had a lifetime of love and
Now I have to say goodbye, knowing that you'll always be the desire of
My heart.

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Written April 21st, 2006

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  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    Merry meet Laced Fox,
    thank you for reading my poem.

  • FoolOnTheHill
    April 24, 2006
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    This poem sets a very good scene and I can easily picture the setting in my mind,very nice, good luck with the contest!