Thoughts of you consumes my every waking moment,
But it is forbidden
Currents of desire when you are near
Banished thoughts of you has me forsaken
Your still here, standing
By my side, supporting
Me when I can't stand alone,
Letting me when I can
Death would be bliss, instead
I am condemned to this torture
There is no pleasure, only pain
I long for your touch, which
Would be such ecstasy, but
Your with her and I am
Alone
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Written April 16th, 2006
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I can relate so well to this poem and i wrote something along the same theme myself. Its so hard to let go of someone you love , maybe even more so when they have left you for another. Looking back i often wonder what was more damaged though , my heart or my ego , time is a great healer. Great write , took me back there for a while
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Merry meet,
Thank you for your generous applause and for commenting on my poem. I wrote this for a friend who was having the same problem, although I think she would have been happier in the long run without him.
Amythest
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great job, well written, thanks for entering and goodluck
melpomene
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