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Bunny to Tea

I invited Bunny to tea,
Next thing I knew,
She'd invited the Flea.

One more cup, one more plate,
Next, came those pesky neighbors,
I thought, "This must be fate."

Sure each and every time, I know
I make plans down to each detail,
The tea party, never smoothly flows.

So no more Bunny for tea,
Because it always seems to cost me
And everyone else gets in for free.

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • Billig Billie
    April 22, 2006
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    Oh, this is so cute! It works so well, and I can see so many nice images. This is a great story and I'm sure both a child and their parent would enjoy this story. ^_^ Good luck in the contest.

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    March 11, 2006
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    Merry Meet,

    if you ever get the chance, do so. It is hysterically funny. I wished I had bookmarked for later.

  • Pink Fairy
    March 11, 2006
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    I haven't read the other bunny one I don't think, so don't worry about it! I really like this poem and who cares if you used someone else idea, as long as you don't copy it all and take all the credit, it's ok, we all have something to lean from other people.
    Good Luck
    Anna xxx

  • Pink Fairy
    March 7, 2006
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    Don't worry Chris doesn't know anything, like I said!

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    March 7, 2006
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    perhaps I should change my name to nutmeg ?

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    March 7, 2006
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    Pink Fairy,
    Merry Meet,

    thank you for your reply. Yes bunny is just bunny in this poem. But I had read the other bunny poem and this one just fell together. Sorry Chris didn't like it, can't please every one, but that's okay.

  • Pink Fairy
    March 7, 2006
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    Hmm now is the bunny meant to be bunny or is it meant to be a swear word, I hope that it is bunny, otherwise I'm not quite sure about it. Chris says this is the crappest poenm he ahs read, but coming form him that means nothing!I really like it (and face it that's what counts)I like the bit about the flea, it made me funny. Again I'm sorry that this is short, but I'm not mean to be on here, will comment on this more later, thanks for the entry and Good Luck
    Anna xxx

  • March 6, 2006
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    Awww it's ok, it wouldn't be fair if I noticed your mistake and didn't say anything!
    *hugs*
    Jess x x x

  • bethan-gaze gold member
    March 6, 2006
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    I would just love to come to one of your tea parties! x You Nutmeg ..

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    March 6, 2006
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    Strangling,

    Merry Meet,

    Thank you, I own an applause to you.

  • March 6, 2006
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    Heh this is such a cute little poem!!! aww good luck in the contest as well!!! But err wasn't there supposed to be a little something you place in your author's comments box?? (HINT HINT) I dunno but I doubt Pink Fairy will disqualify you for it, just errr re-read the rules or something!
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