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Delightfully Decadent ( Acrostic)

Dauntingly she winked
Erotic seduction in every move…
Laughter in her eyes,
Ingenious mind predicting every
Guarded reaction…
Her willful smile
Tantalizing all the senses
Fateful proposition
Ushers in a new time…
Learning curves,
Loving of a different kind
Years of conditioning ~ shattered!

Delightfully playful
Energetic beyond words,
Catalyst of untold change
Alternative ways beckon,
Dare to break free!
Enlightened decisions
New experiences unfold
True freedom!

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nr 9 - Acrostic about anything els
Written December 28th, 2005

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  • Dragonsong silver member
    January 5, 2006
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    thanks Tanzy, I love this one too, just a bit of fun, and yes tit did speak to Moi on many levels ~Dins~

  • tanzanite
    January 5, 2006
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    This is delightful. Up to now I have actually not commented having absolutely no time to do so anymore. But this one is gorgeous. I think it deserves the trophy and I loved the way it spoke to Moira. Great piece friend.

  • Dragonsong silver member
    January 1, 2006
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    Thanks a mil Amunet I had so much fum with this Acrostic, your pic was out of this world! It really sent my mind spinning! Thank you so much for the trophy ~Dini~

  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 1, 2006
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    This is an extremely smooth acrostic! Quite an impressive piece. It speaks volumes quiet elegantly and really weaves the images into the mind. Fabulous job on this!

  • Dragonsong silver member
    December 29, 2005
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    Thank you Moi... mmmm yes biased would be you... but Thank You for the comment, this past weekend has opend so many doors, and shattered more pre-consieved ideas than I knew existed! ~Dini~

  • Astral Lady
    December 28, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Oh my love. How you have captured the magic of that cathartic experience! I had no idea that you knew so much about where I was and where I was going! A really beautiful write, judged by one who is very biased by additional insight!
    ~ Moira

  • Dragonsong silver member
    December 28, 2005
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    Thank you Nena...LOL...so I am back at the adult writing again, The picture in this contest really opend my mind to so many devine posibilities Your comments are truly valued as always ~Dini~
  • Mystic Enchantress
    December 28, 2005
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    It has a really nice rhythm to it... and the message is nice and clear. The form did not take from the message what you were trying to explain. This is a great work my friend and I really loved the reading of it. Thank you for sharing with me this beautiful poem and for your always wonderful gift of your loving pen. Blessed be dear sister, Nena.
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