Top With Crop
Ooh
a top with a crop
what a darn awesome sight
she wields it around
with all of her might
She bends me right over
Down touching my toes
My behind is steadied
O what a pose!
A top with a crop
That comes crashing down hard
A back handed whack
Leaves me truly on guard
Her lines are well placed
And the welts are Her gift,
My Mistress has truly
Given my mind a lift
A top with a crop
What a darn awesome sight
My body she owns
Without hobble or bite…
Her hands can be soft
And her bondage is tight
My Mistress and I
Are united this night!
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Written December 20th, 2005
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Mmm DK ... the chances of me bending over ~ except for a VERY select few ~ is extremely unlikely! I am a lifestyle switch and am actually Domme, except with Astral Lady who knows where and when to ask…
…but the thought of anyone in 6” patents does it for me… thanks for the comment – I will be doing some reading! ~Dini~
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lol thanks tanz, I had fun with this one..and I trust Her enough to know where our relationship is, she is just the most amazing person! I know my love and trust are well placed! Thank you for the applause
~Dins~ 
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Yes Moira would never think of doing this to you. Really not at all. Wonderful piece my friend. I am amazed at the depth of this and the humor and the poetic license!!! Love you lots my friend.
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That was very lovely sweetums! Now I want you to bend over and read Anal Annie and Sir Cockster, and think of my thigh high pattent leather 6 inch spike heel boots as you're standing bent over reading! LOL! This was a very entertaining glimpse into the world of ball gags and muscle subjugated by soft and weak....NICE!!
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Ooooh yes, my love. I know that this is poetic license only too well ... I wouldn't dare!
~ Your Moira
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yessss i did have fun my love.... Just DON'T go getting any ideas - this one is pure poetic licence!
~your Dins~
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This piece brought a broad smile to my face, my love. You have had a lot of fun with this one!
~ Moira
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Thank you my friend, lol I have been having some fun!
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this is really a good write. it gives a good insight to a sub and his Mistress. thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful work Dini... the giving yourself to your Mistress in so many ways is amazing. I love the way you wrote this poem. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your pen. Blessed be dear heart, Nena.
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