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Naughty but Nice

Once upon a Xmas night
Santa pulled his sleigh in tight
Nestled discreetly behind the barn
Tonight Mrs. Clause will not believe this yarn….

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Pixi dust and mistle toe
This fine elf will make Santa grow
Big and proud the north pole stands
Santa Clause is in my hand

A quick kiss here
A nibble there
The glow from Rudilph
Shows me where

Naughty or nice?
He asks me twice,
With a knowing smile…
Santa can beguile….

Cuddled up in his sleigh
Santa has his merry way.
Naughty being twice as nice
Especially when I play with ice…

Ho Ho Ho
Santa soon will glow
Beneath the magic
Of this night

A year will pass
Before again my arse
will be shown to
this great man

Once more he’ll ask
For my list of tasks
Gifts bestowed
On the naughtiest fae….

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Written December 19th, 2005

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  • LovinCharmer gold member
    December 19, 2005
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    Dragonsong, quite a nice poem, very poetic, and I notice you have changed Rudolphs name a bit, that is fine, We know it is poetically fitting, thank you for entering this nice piece into our contest.. good luck as well..Andy

  • Dragonsong silver member
    December 19, 2005
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    thanks Edna, I have fixed it! ~Dini~

  • Dragonsong silver member
    December 19, 2005
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    Thanks for a stunning contest, I had fun with this write!

  • December 19, 2005
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    I like this poem. YOu did not over do the adult things in this. THank you for sharing a very delightful read.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 19, 2005
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    now this I think shows class, with no vulgarity, great words in place of body parts, love this , keep up the good work and thank you for adhering to our rules, and most of all for entering this, am pleased to see this here..Linda

  • Edna Sweetlove
    December 19, 2005
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    A year will pass
    This is a very fine stanza:-

    A year will pass
    Before again my arse
    will be show to
    this great man

    But it should be "shown" not "show".

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