My beloved friend
I saw the light in her eyes
Is it the echoes of my love?
My heart holding you’re understanding
You have me within your smile
You touched me with playful fingers
You touch my inner child
Let us dance into forever
Toss the past away
I can only fill my own shoes
Come to me with your courage
Never I judge you my love
I love you as you are
We are the dance of you and I
Our eyes meet again
Touching each other with their sweetness
You are my beloved friend
Steven Mels
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To Nena who I will always stand by. in love and friendship.
Written December 8th, 2005
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betty thank you much and thank you for reading and commenting on my words..
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Touching and very nice..Good luck in the contest..
Betty -
Beautiful
I really loved this poem. It flowed very beautifully, and I love the way you phrased things to depict what you were trying to say. It's very sincere, and sweet. A lot of love poems, I have always thought felt forced. Like it were written by people who had never experienced it, trying to guess what it felt like by the things they had heard it should be like. But this was very natural. Thank you for sharing it. -
nessa well thank you much ... and it is ok... i didn write it for him... i worte it for myself and the other one who happened to like it very much i might not be published or in anyones top 100.. but i write what i feel in my heart.. thanks nessa
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Well hello again Steven, regarding the the comment above mine, I do not know exactly how you could have done this poem better. The poem itself is a masterpiece of love. Do not change a bit on this poem, it is perfect as it is. I liked it very much and I am positive Nena did too by her comment
Beatifully done! xoxox Nessa
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Nice sentiments. You could fix this a bit and it would be a much better poem though. Anyway, not bad, all in all.
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puppy dog thank you much for the read and the comment.. yes love is garnd.. hehhe et hank you again
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TRULY BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING
Yet another touching and beautiful poem to the one who has captured your heart -
aog thank you much.. and writting it put a huge smile on my face .. thank you i am glad you liked it ..
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stonelion it is a must with love. no one is perfect and love is hard to find. so when you do you cant sit there and judge the one you love... or you will never be happy. love is support , trust and understanding. thank you for your comment and the read.
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A most beautiful dedication of friendship! I'm sure this brought the biggest of smiles to her heart! How wonderfully sweet! Beautifully done, my friend! Hugs, Sandy
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Fantastic work, as usual
Very sweet piece. The idea of love without judgement is something that's just so wonderful and sweet. I love it. Wonderful, my friend.
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hex kool glad that it stirred emotions.. thank yuo for reading and the comment.. thanks bro.
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wow, this just brings back a zillion memories for me. excellent J. O. B. gosh... so many memories
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Steve, you certianly pen a heartbreak well. THis is a wonderful tribute to one who has captivated your heart!
Greay imagery and flow.
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Beautiful and touching tribute to your friend, the tone of the poem is that of a wonderous affair, lovers and friends. Stunning writing and deliberate kindness, soft emotions flow!!
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What a love poem! She should love it!
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Such a beautiful entanglement of words! Each line fit so nicely. Very well done.
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The smile thing has always been my favorite and always will be because, me and my sweetie say it to eachother and we can't wait to look at a smile surrounded by soft lips.
"...how i missed the sound of your smile in my ear tonight..." as I was told one day. Hehe.
The dancing, most definatly. I am a dancer and it makes this strong.
I love every word of it, and this muse must be very strong and lovely.
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snow thank you for your words on my words.. heheh i am glad you liked this write..
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oh this is so beautiful and touching poem! Its almost flawless(because nothing is perfect..) but i loved it, great job, ol' chap(srry i am really gone bozonckers!!) haha Great job!
Love my darling and Merry Christmas,
andie
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blueflame thank you for the read and the comment. this person is more than just a friend she is mylife.. we are and forever wwill be friends thought ..thank you again.
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heart felt and touching
This was a very touching poem. It is so nice to hear about friendships that can last through the highest storm. If only the whole world could be as lucky to have a friend so grand. I loved your poem so much. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more. -
dear brother thank you much.. this is an ode to all love and friendships out there not just mine.. i am glad you enjoyed this .. and i am thank ful for your supportful ( not sure if this is a word) lol words..thank you y friend
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Steve my brother you are on the roll here.I admire this beautiful piece of free verse devoted to friendship.
Good wordflow and employment of imageries makes your poem very unique in every sense to me.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BROTHER! -
lioness thank you much .. this poem is special to me ... i am glad you enjoyed it. thank you much my friend for your comment and the read.
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Very sweet and loving...
such a wonderful thing to see and read. The fourth line was my favorite...
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Nena my friendship has always been here.. and always will be. Chin up be strong. you are a wonderful person.. and dont let anyone tell you different.thank you for being understanding with me as well. i love you so.
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Beautiful Tribute!
This is absolutely gorgeous Sweetheart... a statement and a tribute to friendship... a friendship that have surpassed adversity. I am truly happy to have you as a friend most of anything else in the world. Your friendship means alot to me as does your love. Thank you for sharing this with me and everyone else. Blessed be darling, Nena
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