Faye folk
Luminescent
Frolic in morning mist
As radiant laughter resounds
Magic!
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Written December 6th, 2005
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I loved this cinquain. I believe that cinquain was the third...maybe fourth form that I tried. For a fact though, it was the first I was introduced to on AP. Cinquains are fun to write, for they can say so much, yet with so little words...yet more words(usually), than a haiku. You have done an awesome job with this 22 syllable piece. You even had a bit of imagery and a lot of fairy activity stated in this piece. I love how you ended the piece with magic...such a subject that fairies are known for. Keep up the great work and keep writing!
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Thank you LeFay
To me they are very real, I have a special love for the enchanted realms..
Blessed be
~Dragonsong~
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I love poems having to do with fairies and fayes. Do you believe that they are real? Or is this just a piece about the folklore? Keep on writing.
Blessed be,
LeFay -
I really enjoyed it--a very lovely write!
~Amanda -
Thank you Amanda, this was my first attempt at a Cinquain, and I must say I had an interesting process to get it to a point where I was happy with it... that you for a contest that allows me to share this write.
~Dini~
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Very nice! Normally I am not very fond of cinquains, but this one is quite lovely. Keep on writing!
~Amanda -
Thank you for the comment, I am new at writing fantasy, and I had fun with this one! ~Dini~
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Thank you my friend, As you can see I am growing and having so much fun at the moment! I really love the consept of this contest Well Done! ~Dini~
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awesome write
this was really good. i felt every word.. thank you for sharing this with us.. i love it.. good luck in the contest. -
Beautiful this is all what magic is all about... a fantasy. Thank you dear for sharing this wonder with me and for the beautiful gift of your pen. Blessed be sister, Nena.
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This is nice and airy, as I think a cinquain should be. I enjoyed the subtle use of alliteration. I really liked the use of the word magic.
I think it is so good for writers to try new forms. I just finished taking a tanka form class. It was so much fun and I learned so much from it.
I have written only one fantasy piece. I am giving you a link in case you are interested in reading it. I'm not usually good at writing such things, but this one just rolled out for me. allpoetry.com/Poem/774390
I like the background that you picked to go with your poem, it works nicely. Nice font color as well.
Thank you for entering this contest in honor of my friend, Del. He would (and I am sure he is) smile, watching the interaction between the poets.
Cheryl
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Way to go, Idaho.......what did I just say?
Great imagery, not too long or short, and good flow too!
You get an A+++++++++!! Lol. I could see a beautiful little fairy dancing on a flower petal at dawn!! WAY TO GO!
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Wow, great imagery. Short and sweet! If I didn't know the title of this, I would recognize your description of a fairy. I try to do that a lot. Try reading a poem without seeing the title. Then try to guess the title. If you get it, it's kind of a sign that they did a good job. But try to keep an open mind to crappy pieces!
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short but very good.
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Aaaw thanks tanzanite... I felt like playing a bit tonight when I stumbled upon this contest and I have actually had so much fun! I am glad you liked this one, I am starting to explore new areas in my writing and it seems to be well worth it!
~Dini~
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Lovely piece here Dins - I really enjoyed the images you conjured up and it was so uplifting - you know how I love fairies. Wonderfully picturesque. Well done Dins - loves ya.
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