Shapeless Squirsh was a creature
born without any allure:
from Bambaloo, the neighbor cat
he got fur, all stick in ball of fat…
The small ball of fur bounced
and from the old drooling Ahmed,
he found religious prejudice
and insanity masquerading as justice…
He got bigger but no wiser,
but size did not make him better;
when from old Jack’s heroism
he attained just greedy and imperialism.
But why to stop when so small ?
in the Court he found nothing legal,
much less fair treatment to all;
just the arrogance of Judge Stendhal…
But George, the Catholic priest.
he had to visit for last
and younglings he went to scary
although Squirsh vowed to never marry…
Squirsh is all that and much more,
a monster bleak and mean in his core;
while his fame still inexistent;
his name was reminded to be next president…
Author notes
Written December 3rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Creatures,Ghouls,Etc:Give me your best by SmudgedInk.
300 points, ended December 14, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Silly me ?
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Hehehehehe,Joao!...silly.Thanks for entering my contest.Sorry it took so long to read.I like your style,it doesnt convey so many emotions...but it does...It is funny.Presidents are scary!But Bush looks funny because he looks liek a little monkey.Good job and goodluck
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Vampires, werewolves, mummies, noooooooo...the most scary monsters are all presidents
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Doesn't it sound familiar
I think we al have seem Squirsh's all around the world, and sacry enough, they do get to be presidents lol
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Aali
Oh,Jaoa..this one was really beautiful.I think that you’ll win this contest (inshallah)
Ahmad is a Persion name (My friend’s bf) and I’m wonder you use it in this poem.Did you mean someone especial?Please let me know
Wish you the best.
~Massy~
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weird but good o.O
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nice work
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