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True friendship

TRUE FRIENDSHIP

T  rust is the basis of any relationship,
R  ejection and fear, the killers.
U  nderstanding first oneself, then others,
E  nlightenment comes from within.

F  reedom from judgment,
R  ecognition of the truth,
I  intensity of emotions,
E  mbracing all of each other.
N  o pretence on any level, nor
D  efence or justification of
S  elf-imposed standards of
H  onesty and integrity. The
I  mportance of the realisation that
P  roblems are challenges for opportunities to be met.

Author notes

I have recently been challenged on various levels and have gained enormous insight into the value of what makes up a true frienship. For this I am enormously grateful.
Written November 30th, 2005

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  • Astral Lady
    December 2, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment, Joan. I am so glad that you enjoyed this write. Friendship is something I treasure very highly. I must thank you for this contest.
    ~ Moira

  • angelica silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    A wonderful Acrostic on true Friendship. When you have such wonderful friends you hold onto them and cherish them, for they are very special people in our lives. Well written.
    Good luck in our contest.
    Hugs Joan

  • Astral Lady
    December 1, 2005
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    Thank you so much for this comment, Tattboy. I am so pleased that you enjoyed this read. It is a philosophy that I have always held to.
    ~ Moira

  • Tattboy silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    Moira this was beautiful; both as a poem and as a philosophy.

    Thank you for sharing this tender poem.

  • Astral Lady
    December 1, 2005
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    Oh Richard. Coming from you, this is high praise indeed! Thank you so very much. Your critiques are always the first ones that I look for. I love your poetry and hold your work in high esteem. I have no more words, except a heartfelt "Thank you".
    ~ Moira

  • Astral Lady
    December 1, 2005
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    Gaia, Thank you. You too are one of those people who value frienship very highly. I am so fortunate to have you as a house mate. You truly do care and you show this in so many ways. I am very glad that you enjoyed this write. I value your comments and learn so much from your critiques. Thank you my friend.
    ~ Moira

  • Astral Lady
    December 1, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment Jennifer. It is I who should be thanking you for the contest. So - "Thank you"!! I agree with you - friendship should be cherished. I value friendship above almost everything else. I know that friendship needs to be nurtured in order to be sustained, but even more so, if it is to grow (as with anything in nature).
    Yes, I am a spiritual person. I am so very conscious of the spiritual in every area of my life. I cannot imagine living a life of any meaning without my spiritual side being expressed.
    Thank you again.
    ~ Moira

  • Astral Lady
    December 1, 2005
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    So true my love. I was sure that you would appreciate 'us' in this write! I don't seem to be able to write without you inside my words! We are certainly growing so fast at the moment. I am so grateful that we are on this journey together. We are having fun while learning plenty.
    ~ Moira

  • tanzanite
    December 1, 2005
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    Wonderful poem about true friendship - not only do you do this with Dins but also with me. I think you are one of the truest friends i have ever had. This was wonderful.

  • jenelda silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    True Friendship is something that should be cherished, you sound as though you are very spiritual. That is wonderful.
    Thank you for entering our contest.
    Good Luck.
    Jennifer.

  • Dragonsong silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    O yes my Love, and we are meeting each challenge with open arms. With honest communication, and a mutual acknowledgement of each others emotions we can only grow through each and every challenge that the universe places before us! Thank you for sharing so much of yourself! ~Dins~
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