as my mind falls into insanity,
my words utter profanity's.
i've told them i love them
but now those words mean nothing.
all i do is destroy bliss,
yet her words make me miss.
in this relationship im in the collar,
an she alone has the power to maker me holler.
strap me down,
grinding body's on the ground.
obsessive fantisy's revealed,
sexual disires overzealed.
bondage an domination is the game,
knifes drag over her body to maim.
this big turn-on of razor blade romance,
turns this sexcapade is into a into a lustful dance.
a hunger shows in my eyes,
as my lips kiss her thieghs.
she looks down on me,
an opens up sexually....
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Written November 29th, 2005
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kick ass poem....loved the word play...>>>>>
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i love this poem keep it up!!!
LoVe Ya
~*BeCcA*~
you are a great writer
keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!! -
This is very dirty.
It reminds me of me and my boyfriend. X-X The only problem I have with this poem is that you rhyme too much! Nice poem though. 
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yay, i can't wait, you are a very good writer.
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thanks, there is more on the way....
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the greatest
Way awome poem! So dark and dirty i love it. Do some more man!! -
wow i jus put this up! like three sec.s ago.....THANKS!!!!
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wow, this is strong, it is very dark, i love the way you put your words together, very very nice.
<3
Kelsey
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