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My hatchet baby

for sum reason i feel like i have a kid...
it's wierd though...
cuz i know she isnt mine,
yet to me she is devine...
i never met this kid of mine,
but yet i think of her all the time.
i havent told my homies yet,
but scared they'll be i bet...
i dont have my parent's approval,
but these feelings are removeable.
but what makes her mine to take?
the feelings i put forth make me at stake.
i play with the blood on my hands,
yet i kno her blood will never be mine.i remember sleepless nights.
i think of this child,
with thoughts of passion that make me wild.
the thoughts of her mother
can be prof that she is a angel's luver.
i cant call but i want to,
i long to hold but i cant hold myself.....

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Written November 29th, 2005

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  • CinSoBella
    March 2, 2006
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    Holy f*ck, that was amazing!!!!! Holla! <333 Cin!

  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    December 6, 2005
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    awwww this is really sweet i can tell you have really stroing feelings foir this girl and her child and i hope thigs work out well
    LoVe Ya
    ~*BeCcA*~

    you are a great writer
    keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!!

  • MadPoetyLady
    December 1, 2005
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    Awww... How sweet. I can see that you have a lot of feelings for this girl and her child. I hope that things work out well.

    Hell Angel

  • kristas brand new
    November 29, 2005
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    awwww... i dunno what to say...