“Well done girl…”
Her words are soft,
Her hands gentle and loving
as She draws me near.
Lifting my head to face Her
She holds my kneeling form,
Running Her hands through my hair
i know i have done well!
She is my Mistress
Powerful, yet gentle
Caring, yet demanding,
She knows what She wants
And will take it, without question
For i have placed myself at Her feet
an act of true submission.
i give myself freely,
Safe-words no longer wanted
for we have become one.
i am hers, my body ~ Her toy
To care for and cherish,
my being She moulds,
Continuous training
Striving for perfection.
i kneel before her,
bared skin presented
anticipating the caress of Her hand,
The kiss of Her whip,
Untold pleasures await…
my head drops,
Body and soul no longer one,
On the wings of subspace
my heart takes flight
Exquisite pain drives me higher.
Cold steel
Blood rushes to the surface
Blade connects with skin
i feel Her mark…
Her sign of ownership
Slowly drawn upon my back
A sharp smack draws blood
i soar once more!
Author notes
As a natural Domme, submission for me is one of the biggest gifts that I can give and I have been blessed in a relationship where both my Domme and my sub are loved and honored! My Love has allowed me to start exploring my submissive side, and with Her I am growing on all levels!
Written November 23rd, 2005
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It sounds like the best of both worlds to me.
A very fine, ensual, erotic, and loving piece! ITRULY enjoyed it and it makes me wish that we weren't oceans away! This passed my HARDNESS test (hands down and you know where) before I could finish the first stanza! I will definately be back to have a look at more of these wonderful DOMME poems as often as I am able!
Love & Peace!
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Thank you silversoliloquysong I really tried to show the depth of our love, and the true nature of our play, by reading Her poem a cut of love(contest winner), and my other poem Mistress of Mine you will get a true reflection of our relationship. We share something so beautifull and unique that it goes far beyond words. She is the first woman I have been with in bdsm, and she has opened me up to so many new oppertunaties and the most increadable growth! Thank you for your beautiful words. Truly appreciated as always!!!
~Dini~
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oooh, this is an incredibly erotic, sensuous and loving piece! beautiful! the commitment and adoration shine through, as does your utter submission to this wonderful one who has inspired your growth. mmmmm, this makes me long for a woman... it's been too long, and i've never been with one in a bdsm context... incredible write!
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Beautiful
A beautiful poem. Thanks for posting this. It is wonderful to watch the two of you together ...
As for losing hard limits, trust tanzanite, she knows aaaaaall about that!
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Thank you Rose, Yes we have a unique relationship, we are first and formost best friends, and then comes lovers and playmates! Our Play takes BDSM to new levels, and we grow every time we are together, it is the most amazing learning curve of my life!
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uh hu..
...what was it on last count..ummm 4 no 5 knives in my toybag...O BOY! 
Thanks for the crit my friend, yes our relationship is amazing She is allowing me to look at hard limits, and very soon they disolve! Exciting times
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You have done so beautifully in expressing your love for your Mistress and all around lover. From your words, I can tell that you both have a very unique and special bond that is really hard to come by. This was written beautifully. Thank you so much for entering my contest. I truly appreciate it and apologise for the delay in commenting.
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This is stunning. I loved this - you described the relationship perfectly and having seen you guys together, I can see this happening. This coming from someone who had a fear of knives and now has a fetish. Raises eyebrow...
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Thank you Moi, yes our BDSM realtionship is built on trust, and an increadable love has grown out of that! What we have, is the kind of realtionship that most people can only dream of! Thank You for allowing me the space to grow, and experience myself as who I am...I can see the growth, in both my Domme, and my sub, and this growth is astounding!!! 
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Very special
Oh my dearest. You have done it again. I am battling for words! You have captured a gentleness and warmth in our bdsm which is brought about by the quality of our love. Thank you for sharing it. This is really a beautiful write.
~ Moira
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Thanks Sis, yes I have been having fun, I can see my writing changing and growing as I do, and I am finding this to be an increadably exciting time, thank you for sharing this growth with me
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Beautifully Penned!
This is one wonderful Domme/sub poem you penned here sister Dini... very beautiful, enticing and very erotic without being vulgar. I truly loved and enjoyed the reading of this work. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your loving and erotic pen... Write on and Good luck in the Contest!!
~Elba
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