i listen to this music an i cant help think,
what the lil kid of my girls isnt mine drinks.
i know that she isnt mine but yet to my heart he is!
i cant help thinking about her even though im only 16.
but when i know that if i were to claim her,
i would be disowned, yet it isnt the thought doesnt stop me...
i resolve to ask her for the kid....
the girl that i also cant help thinking about...
i ask u lostinwunderland....
let us share this kid?
ur like my wife thingy an the kid to me is my own...
but i know she will never be related to me,
but that doesnt bother me.....
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Written November 22nd, 2005
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This is really sweet, a little confusing but sweet.
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A awesome piece. I had to do a bit of thinking to work it out, but I like that in a poem. Well done, keep it up.
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i love this poem it's really sweet and again i hope things work out
LoVe Ya
~*BeCcA*~
you are a great writer
keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!! -
well thank u! idk wat to say really....but thanks....
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great job, and she(lostinwunderlan) is very pround of you, and this poem...i would cause she told me!lol...great job, andkeep it up!!!
~Casey~
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cute
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FOOD. @_@
: D
Ah!
I'm a bit confused, I thought lostinwunderland was your kid...And I though she was my sister. @_@
*thinks too hard*
Okay, well anyway, I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving! : D
~ Miss Lady ~
P.S. - I LOVE MASHED POTATOES!!!! *hoards the mashed potatoes* -
Awww... Sweet.
~Mommy~!
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