THE CUT OF LOVE
Giggling,
My wench is ticklish!
Painfully sensitive to my touch.
Eyes blindfolded,
Yet seeing all -
Through the other four senses.
Cacophony of sounds.
Pungent smells.
Aromatic tastes.
Senses heightened -
She cannot relax.
“Lie still wench!”
I whisper commandingly.
She freezes.
My gloved hand
Moves the scalpel
Steadily through her skin.
She lets out a sigh of release.
Six to eight layers
Is all I need,
To leave my mark,
A simple pattern,
Engraved on her skin.
She moans her pleasure.
No blood yet.
I smack the pattern hard,
Slowly the blood starts to trickle.
The marks will be gone
Within two weeks.
Her muscles relax as she lets go.
Lost in subspace
Now ready at last
Her sex smell begs for me
Her swollen lips
Can’t hide the wetness within
My hand enters,
Her body arches.
Muscles contract.
She cries out in ecstasy
Through her extended orgasm
Why? You may ask.
If you need to cut,
Why not cut
A permanent mark?
The answer is simple.
My purpose is to heighten
Her sexual pleasure - through pain.
She is mine.
She gave herself freely.
I have no need to mark her.
For she, my slave,
Is my lover, my friend.
Author notes
AFRICAN GROUP
I am in a switch BDSM relationship with my female lover. I am writing this from the Mistress point of view. Ours is certainly an interesting and definitely a fun relationship. We both know which "triggers" to use on each other in order to bring about the switch and so get what we want! Not topping from the bottom though - when we switch we go into Domme and sub mode completely. It is truly beautiful!
Written November 22nd, 2005
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Exceptional!
Brilliant write! You capture EXACTLY what it is to be a Domme and a sub (or in other cases, Dom/su
I could never imagine myself doing these sorts of things to Master, but I could DEFINITELY imagine Him doing these sorts of things to me 
Once again, congratulations on capturing both points from both perspectives
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Oh gaia. Thank you. Your comments always mean so much to me. You pull no punches! For this reason, what you have said here is particularly meaningful to me. You and your poetry are a constant inspiration to me. You are one of my main poetry mentors. So, thank you again for your encouragement and confidence in me!
~ Moira
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I loved this piece. I think you wrote it beautifully Moira. Your dom is very strong and you are one of the few in this country that i feel has earned the title of being a dom. Wonderful write my friend and one i enjoyed immensely.
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Thank you so very much Cheryl. Your comment is very much appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed this write. I loved writing and living it! So true - responsible experimentation with one's lover is such a very special experience!
~ Moira
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this is a stunning write there is nothing more erotic then giving yourself over to another and being able to experiment with each other for heightened plasures i love the way you have worded this very very well done and good luck in the contest xx Cheryl
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Oh Elba, thank you for your high praise! Yes, writing about edge-play was a challenge, as I wanted to show the love with which it was done and the joy with which it was received. Thank you and others on AP for your open minds!
~ Moira
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Thank you for your comment Richard. Yes, the connection between pain and pleasure, and giving oneslf in trust and taking the gift with responsibility, are what makes bdsm real for me. Ultimately, it is about both partners gaining heightened levels of sexual pleasure. I am so glad that you gained something from this piece.
~ Moira
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Beautifully Penned!
My goodness m'Lady Moira this is one wonderful poem, it made me think. i truly enjoyed the reading of this work... it is fascinating how love can be shown on different levels in the lifestyle... congrats for having the courage to write about it and to post it for O/our open minds. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your creative pen.
~Elba
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Thank you for your comment feathered-spiders. I am so glad you found the read absorbing, even though you have no idea what BDSM is about. I applaud you for your open-minded attitude towards the unknown - in this case a different lifestyle.
~ Moira
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Ok. I have no idea what BDSM is, or exactly what this piece is about, but it definitely a strong and very evocative piece of work that holds a lot of force over the reader. You really get into the piece and become a part of it, which could be a problem for those who aren't into this sort of thing, but for those who are open minded, such as myself, it is a glimpse into another world, one like fantasy and mystery. I liked the force in this piece, and the storng tone used throughout. Well done.
Avian xx -
Oh my sweet one. I too thank you for sharing your life with me. Every time we are together something happens to shift our relationship into a new gear. May we never run out of gears!
~ Moira
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Thank you for your comment, Queen of Cups. I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece.
~ Moira
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Very intresting write
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I have actually read a lot about BDSM and am intrigued by the subject. I think I am one of the most open-minded people living. I love to read about this subject, I also love writing about it. However, I don't think it would suit me as a lifestyle, simply because I value making my own decisions, but I am also not a dominant. I have read on the safety of finding the right partner and I personally think it is wonderful relationship, but not for me, though I will always enjoy reading and writing about it. Thank you again for entering my contest. I urge you to tell any others you know who may be interested.
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I am so very glad that you enjoyed my submission 'The cut of love" in your contest. I have read that you are not into the BDSM scene yourself and I would like to commend you on your open-mindedness and genuine desire to gain a better understanding and appreciation of this type of relationship. I have found that there is no substitute for real life experience in order to gain a true understanding of the lifestyle. On this, however, a word of caution. Be very careful in your choice of who you play with. My advice is that you watch and talk to players and ask questions freely. Only play with someone once you feel you can trust them with your life. This may sound melodramatic - but trust should be the basis of any relationship. In BDSM it is different only in that trust is a prerequisite. The depth of love developed in a BDSM relationship is very much greater than that found in others, because of the nature of the relationship requiring an extremely high level of honesty (with oneself and one's partner), trust and openness of communication.
I hope I haven't gone on too long! I am passionate about the lifestyle and have a particular love for and desire to help newcomers. I truly wish you a fulfilled and happy life in whatever lifestyle choices you make.
Love,
Moira
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This is a very beautiful submission indeed; one of the best I've gotten so far. Your words flow with a deep, meaningful beauty of trust and love, not to mention enjoyment in pleasure.
Thank you kindly for entering my contest so that I may appreciate and be intrigued by this type of relationship even more.
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Thank you Sylvyrwyng for your comment. Yes I enjoyed writing this one - I wanted to share myself and why I enjoy this lifestyle. It is not only about any ONE of the following - technique, pleasure and pain, sex, power exchange, caring, nurturing etc - but ALL of the above!
~ Moira
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Beauty, pain and ecstasy all wrapped up in phrase. Wonderful work hon. Poignant and touching as well as very revealing in ways. Excellent work. Please keep it up.
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STUNNING!!!!
O yes my Love, my Brat can pull that Domme out in a second flat, and then you have my true submission…. And as for being ticklish…well yes…Let us NOT go there….*raises eyebrow*…Ours is a relationship most people only dream of, true love, and sharing on all levels, down to the ultimate gift of submission ~ From BOTH sides…I love your Domme, she is strong and caring and deliciously wicked… and I love your “little girl” with her emotions, her giggle and her innocence. Thank You for sharing this most amazing time with me!
~Dini~ 
ps.... this is well written... good luck in the contest!
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