I place myself before Her
my lover and my friend,
Head bowed in true submission
my trust is on the mend.
my gift to Her is endless
Unconditional love is the key,
Her hand will mould and guide me
To be the best that i can be!
i offer her my body,
my spirit and my soul
i listen to Her guidance
my gift to Her ~ control
Within our loving unity
Comes immeasurable growth
An inner strength of character
Brings out the best in Both
She is a worthy Mistress
i am Her humble slave,
Her body is my temple
Her pleasure’s what i crave…
The trust that’s been established
Is so precious, so divine
It leads to untold pleasures
As She marks me with a line…
Her rope allows me freedom
my soul again can soar.
A loving kiss upon my back
Where whips have been before.
A love that can no longer
Be hidden from the world
I hold My dearest closer
As my heart is now unfurled
Author notes
Tried playing around with trust and guidance
Written November 17th, 2005
prewrite option4
In a list
A contest entry
- S IS FOR STRENGTH OF SPIRIT & SOULMATES on the way to Z by Blue Rew.
1710 points, ended October 26, 2007, 14 entries
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I'm sorry, this poem needs to have an honorable trophy in or to be eligible for this contest. I'll have to remove it.
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Tender write, nice rhyming too. I like the traits written about here....very important to the essence of love {trust & guidance/communication}.
I did not get to read the original version as there
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Thank you Elba, I truly appreciate your wonderful words of praise. Yes I share a special Love, that is very unique, and incredibly special! Not many ~ even within the lifestyle can understand the relationship that we share, for 2 Dommes to come together in Love and switch amongst ourselves has been a special blessing of immeasurable proportions. I never dreamed that I would be able to submit to this level, and I am LOVING it!
With my writing I have found and expression of that Love and I hope that I can continue to share this with you and your love!
~hugs and kisses~
Dini
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Thank you So much Richard! Your words have truly touched me. I try to pass on through my writing the love that I am feeling, and you have shown me that I am starting to find the words to express this precious state that I am currently experiencing.
I am so glad that you and Elba can share in my growth, and Love
Love and Light
~Dini~
and I will pass this rose on to Astral lady ~ Thank You!
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Beautifully Romantic!
Holy wonderful gods of love, sister Dini... this is beautiful, to show the love you have for Her in such wonderful way. This is absolutely gorgeous... i really enjoyed the reading of this work. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your loving pen.
~Elba
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Thanks Vampiric, I am really glad you enjoyed this , I had so much fun writing it.
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Beautiful words. I love the flow and emotion to this piece. Very good. And the meaning and description is wonderful. Good luck in the contest and keep on writing!
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Thank you my love
Yes this is a reflection of something special, that all those who know us have become very aware of! I am so glad you like it... this one is for you!
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Wow, my dear love. Thank you for sharing your feelings with me and the world! You are so right. We have absolutley no need, nor desire to hide our love from the world. In fact we don't even see the world around us when we are together! You have captured the essence of our love here. I'm am breathless!
~ Moira
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